May 2021 Contest WIP Feedback Kindly Requested
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This is great. I love the interaction between the two, they look like they are a real partnership and know exactly what their are doing. To add the Melissa’s very well written comment regarding the spider character - if you have look at spiders they also have a strange amount of eyes! Without losing the feel of your piece and it’s stylised look, adding the fangs and extra eyes would make the spider a really fearsome creature
I just googled ‘spider eyes’ for ref. Not sure if I should add a photo here or not
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Hi @lizardillo, so I re-drew the spider to be more realistic but just wasn’t feeling it, so I decided to stick with my original monster-ish-like spider.
I adjusted the lighting based on input from @Melissa-Bailey-0. It’s not perfect, but I’m happy with it.
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@Jeremy-Ross it looks great. The spiders legs are a lot clearer now the crows have gone so it looks more spider-y by just doing that without the need to add the extra facial features
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@Jeremy-Ross the concept and composition is beautiful! Good Luck with it!!!
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Thank you @Georgios-Christopoulos and @lizardillo!
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@Jeremy-Ross really nice! The lighting makes SUCH a difference. Great job!
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Thank you so much @Melissa-Bailey-0! I really appreciate you taking your time to offer feedback throughout my revisions.
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@Jeremy-Ross It looks really great! I'm really at the beginning of my journey, so a lot of times I don't have much feedback to give in terms of improving, but is so interesting to see how these small changes make such a difference!! Good luck for the contest.
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@Jeremy-Ross So fun! I love how the spider is scary but also somehow adorable? Perfect children's book balance! I'm also obsessed with her little spur earrings that match the ones on her shoes. Such a fun little detail. Best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your kind words @TaniaGomesArt! Often times, I complete my piece at the 11th hour and lose the opportunity for feedback from this wonderful community.
Feedback is such a wonderful gift!
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Hi @ellenseal14, thank you for your kind words! I drew a super scary spider as an alternative; however, it just didn’t feel cohesive so I stuck with a furry big-eyed toothy monster spider.
Her earrings are pretty cute!
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Whoa! This is so amazing!
Much love and God bless!
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Thank you so much @frankiiij! I was very lucky to get some incredible feedback from the group.
