May 2021 Contest WIP Feedback Kindly Requested

Jeremy Ross

Hi @lizardillo, so I re-drew the spider to be more realistic but just wasn’t feeling it, so I decided to stick with my original monster-ish-like spider.

I adjusted the lighting based on input from @Melissa-Bailey-0. It’s not perfect, but I’m happy with it.

lizardillo

@Jeremy-Ross it looks great. The spiders legs are a lot clearer now the crows have gone so it looks more spider-y by just doing that without the need to add the extra facial features

Georgios Christopoulos

@Jeremy-Ross the concept and composition is beautiful! Good Luck with it!!!

Jeremy Ross

Thank you @Georgios-Christopoulos and @lizardillo!

Melissa_Bailey

@Jeremy-Ross really nice! The lighting makes SUCH a difference. Great job!

Jeremy Ross

Thank you so much @Melissa-Bailey-0! I really appreciate you taking your time to offer feedback throughout my revisions.

TaniaGomesArt

@Jeremy-Ross It looks really great! I'm really at the beginning of my journey, so a lot of times I don't have much feedback to give in terms of improving, but is so interesting to see how these small changes make such a difference!! Good luck for the contest.

ellenseal_art

@Jeremy-Ross So fun! I love how the spider is scary but also somehow adorable? Perfect children's book balance! I'm also obsessed with her little spur earrings that match the ones on her shoes. Such a fun little detail. Best of luck in the contest!

Jeremy Ross

Thank you for your kind words @TaniaGomesArt! Often times, I complete my piece at the 11th hour and lose the opportunity for feedback from this wonderful community.

Feedback is such a wonderful gift!

Jeremy Ross

Hi @ellenseal14, thank you for your kind words! I drew a super scary spider as an alternative; however, it just didn’t feel cohesive so I stuck with a furry big-eyed toothy monster spider.

Her earrings are pretty cute!

frankiiij

Whoa! This is so amazing!

Jeremy Ross

Thank you so much @frankiiij! I was very lucky to get some incredible feedback from the group.