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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

      @PenAndrew you can as many characters as want I believe. Just good storytelling and concept

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      • PenAndrew
        PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos Yes-that's the harder stuff! Storytelling and Concept.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

          @PenAndrew I should add though for a dynamic illustration you generally want two to three characters

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          • PenAndrew
            PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos Yes I agree and I must learn how to make characters interact. I guess as I work thorough level two of the foundations I will get a better idea.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

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              • Patricia Dishmon
                Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos Can I suggest having her already at a dig site or something and then the sandstorm blows through? I think it'll be clearer that she's there for the ruins if she's already at the ruins. And it'll make it clearer that the storm is inconvenient. Know what I'm saying? Otherwise, she's just kinda walking around in the desert.

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  About to add the “storm” wish me luck!
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                  • Holumpa
                    Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos The sandstorm idea is so good! And your style as always super charming.
                    About adidng the storm, just as an idea, maybe let the camel props be blown, too, the reigns, the saddle cloth ect.

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                    • PenAndrew
                      PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos Great characters.

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by

                        @Holumpa thanks for the feedback! I thought about that, but a lot of the bottom part of the camel I think is going to be obstructed by the storm, which is why didn’t do much in terms of his legs, but I could play with maps more and maybe whisps of camel hair. Thanks again

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                          Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                          @PenAndrew thank you!

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Its a crazy feeling to almost completely cover up a picture you just finished, what are your thoughts? Is it too much, did I lose out most of my details?
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                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              I’m thinking of adding a bird of some sort to the upper left corner, a falcon or ibis?

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                              • Kristen Lango
                                Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos Wow this is so cool, I can really see and feel that sand blowing. Great job!

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                                  Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                  @Kristen-Lango thank you!

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                                  • Johanna Kim
                                    Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos A sandstorm! What a cool idea. Love how this looks. I don't think it's too much. Definitely feels like sand moving swiftly through the air.

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                                    • frankiiij
                                      frankiiij @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos OHHHHHHH...MYYYYYY...GOODNESS!!!! This looks so authentic! So Gorgeous!

                                      Much love and God bless!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @frankiiij last edited by

                                        @frankiiij thank you I appreciate your enthusiasm! 😁

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                                          Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                          @Johanna-Kim thank you!❤️

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            Does the falcon sit well or does he convolute the story? I was just trying to show the difference in the air (in case it wasn’t obvious lol) and the thickness below
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