Storm reworked

AngelinaKizz

I was super grateful to be amongst the top 16 last month, and I’ve finally had a chance to take the advice/critique offered by @Jake-Parker and @Will-Terry to improve on my little mouse.

I would love to hear thoughts on the before and afters.!

Before

After

Kim Rosenlof

@AngelinaKizz The after picture is definitely better!

AngelinaKizz

@Kim-Rosenlof thanks Kim! I’m much happier with the second. I can definitely employ the critique in the next pieces as well.

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AngelinaKizz

@Stephanie-H
Thankyou!
I wish i could say there was a whole lot of thought that went into the story for this illustration. It was a quickie that id done up in under 2 hours. I just had this idea to create an illustration of finding peace in a storm, as i love getting cozy and listening to the music of the rain and thunder.

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Johanna Kim

@AngelinaKizz Huge improvement! Looks awesome!

ajillustrates

Love the updates!

AngelinaKizz

@Stephanie-H @Johanna-Kim @ajillustrates thanks so much! I’m so grateful to have gotten some critique. I want so badly to grow as an illustrator and felt like I wasn’t moving forward even though I was following the classes, and sketching daily. They’re few words of advice definitely was a huge aha moment, and I’ll employ it going forward.

jenn

@AngelinaKizz the characters are definitely more engaged with each other now. It's like you've captured a nice moment between them.

AngelinaKizz

@jenn thanks!

Asyas_illos

@AngelinaKizz its much better. I love the texture you gave the cork, and the extra space around your main character is perfect, well done!

AngelinaKizz

@Asyas_illos thanks Asyas!