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  • jenn
    jenn @Asyas_illos last edited by 8 Jul 2022, 03:16

    @Asyas_illos ooh I like the ghostly buns!

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      A Former User @Asyas_illos last edited by 8 Jul 2022, 03:39

      @Asyas_illos Lovely colors!

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Guest last edited by 8 Jul 2022, 04:32

        @JQ thanks!

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by 8 Jul 2022, 04:44

          Working on my racers!
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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 8 Jul 2022, 15:56 8 Jul 2022, 15:24

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by 8 Jul 2022, 20:47

                Well folks, I think I’m wrapping this one up! If you see anything I may have missed I’m still open to feedback!
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                  • Meekipink
                    Meekipink @Asyas_illos last edited by 9 Jul 2022, 07:31

                    @Asyas_illos Ohhhh, I love it!!! My only suggestion would be to adjust your lighting to emphasise the storytelling aspect - for example, reducing the brightness of the background. Right now I'm not exactly sure where to look, I'm drawn immediately to the blank spots on your path instead of your bunnies (the path has quite a high contrast compared to everything else). Maybe limit your brightest areas so it leads the eye where you want it to (e.g. the closest bunny and the finish line).

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Meekipink last edited by 9 Jul 2022, 23:10

                      @Meekipink thanks for the feedback😊 I think I like the the high contrast though, in my eyes it allows you follow along the path to each racer. But I appreciate your point of view!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 10 Jul 2022, 01:17 9 Jul 2022, 23:14

                        Ok so this is totally wild, I know, but I really wanted to do something that was completely nonsensical and whimsical wrapped up into one. Something that makes you do a double take, so I thought of this sort of dreamscape last night while trying to fall asleep, and viola! Is it too crazy? I’m also adding stars and other details to enhance the environment, which is of course what I’ve been focusing on. Let me know your thoughts!

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 01:17

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                          • AngelinaKizz
                            AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 02:22

                            @Asyas_illos oooh it's super cute, definitely whimsical, but I'm not getting rabbit road race.. it would be prefect in a dreamy scenario though!

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 02:47

                              @AngelinaKizz it’s basically a dream here’s the rest of the concept
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                              • Holumpa
                                Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 07:57

                                @Asyas_illos Both pieces are gorgeous! I love the creativity in the second one and I admire your skills with environment/Background, such wonderful solutions.

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                                • Eliana Bastidas
                                  Eliana Bastidas last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 09:35

                                  I like more the second option. Like I saw in previous comments, the characters are lost in the background a bit. In the second one it doesn’t happen.

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 15:05

                                    @Holumpa thank you so much I usually struggle with creative background ideas so I’m really pushing myself!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 15:06

                                      I highlighted the grass behind the main character a bit maybe that helps him pop out a little more?
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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 10 Jul 2022, 19:33 10 Jul 2022, 18:27

                                        Postin some progress😜
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                                        • AngelinaKizz
                                          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by 10 Jul 2022, 20:58

                                          @Asyas_illos it's so good... I love it!

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