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    My road race wips ^_^

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Ok so this is totally wild, I know, but I really wanted to do something that was completely nonsensical and whimsical wrapped up into one. Something that makes you do a double take, so I thought of this sort of dreamscape last night while trying to fall asleep, and viola! Is it too crazy? I’m also adding stars and other details to enhance the environment, which is of course what I’ve been focusing on. Let me know your thoughts!

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      • Asyas_illos
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        • AngelinaKizz
          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos oooh it's super cute, definitely whimsical, but I'm not getting rabbit road race.. it would be prefect in a dreamy scenario though!

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

            @AngelinaKizz it’s basically a dream here’s the rest of the concept
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            • Holumpa
              Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos Both pieces are gorgeous! I love the creativity in the second one and I admire your skills with environment/Background, such wonderful solutions.

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              • Eliana Bastidas
                Eliana Bastidas last edited by

                I like more the second option. Like I saw in previous comments, the characters are lost in the background a bit. In the second one it doesn’t happen.

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by

                  @Holumpa thank you so much I usually struggle with creative background ideas so I’m really pushing myself!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    I highlighted the grass behind the main character a bit maybe that helps him pop out a little more?
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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                      Postin some progress😜
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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos it's so good... I love it!

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @AngelinaKizz haha thanks

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Think I’m gonna sit on this for a couple days… feedback welcome!
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                            • AngelinaKizz
                              AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos I noticed one small thing, that when it's thumbnail sized, the bunny riding the carrot isn't as clear as I think he should be. His shirt dissipates into background, and the pink and orange seem to be of similar value (without doing a black and white flip).

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                @AngelinaKizz thanks! Yes since I have the light shining on them from the star it washes out the bunnies darker tone and I’ll look into darker colored pajamas options 😊

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  I think this helps a little.? I don’t want to bring them much darker cuz it will then become similar in value to her fur… maybe she should have no pajamas? Would it still appear she is dreaming?
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                                  • AngelinaKizz
                                    AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos I really like the changes you've made!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      Yep started another lol I’m from Northern California and live in the redwoods where we have a drive through tree, so this was inspired by that. Although these days you can probably only fit a vw bug or fiat through it. So my concept is one young bunny is too mesmerized by the giant trees he is being passed by the other runners. Thoughts?
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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Update fitting characters into comp!

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                                        • AngelinaKizz
                                          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @Asyas_illos absolutely gorgeous background design

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                            @AngelinaKizz thank you I was a little worried it was a bit too saturated.

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