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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos it's so good... I love it!

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        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

        @AngelinaKizz haha thanks

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Think I’m gonna sit on this for a couple days… feedback welcome!
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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos I noticed one small thing, that when it's thumbnail sized, the bunny riding the carrot isn't as clear as I think he should be. His shirt dissipates into background, and the pink and orange seem to be of similar value (without doing a black and white flip).

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              Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

              @AngelinaKizz thanks! Yes since I have the light shining on them from the star it washes out the bunnies darker tone and I’ll look into darker colored pajamas options 😊

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                I think this helps a little.? I don’t want to bring them much darker cuz it will then become similar in value to her fur… maybe she should have no pajamas? Would it still appear she is dreaming?
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                • AngelinaKizz
                  AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I really like the changes you've made!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Yep started another lol I’m from Northern California and live in the redwoods where we have a drive through tree, so this was inspired by that. Although these days you can probably only fit a vw bug or fiat through it. So my concept is one young bunny is too mesmerized by the giant trees he is being passed by the other runners. Thoughts?
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                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Update fitting characters into comp!

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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos absolutely gorgeous background design

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                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @AngelinaKizz thank you I was a little worried it was a bit too saturated.

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                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            I did a light blue overlay layer over the whole thing just to see if it would cool it off a bit.
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                            • Kristen Lango
                              Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos The ghost bunnies are a great addition! I like that a lot and great job with your color palette too!

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                              • Kristen Lango
                                Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos I love this whimsical piece! I can totally feel that this is her dream and I think you've done a really nice job of making her color that pinkish coral - it really draws your eye there.

                                I'm thinking, one thing that might make it even stronger would be to make the fish a less warm color - the yellow is nice and lovely but its so bright I just wonder if they were perhaps a sea-foam green or a light purple if the story would be even clearer?

                                I'm only bringing this up because the fish are so beautifully done and I feel my eye wanting to look at them more than the main character.

                                But absolutely great work on this one!!

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                                  Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                  @Kristen-Lango thank you for the feedback! I’ve already submitted but maybe I’ll play around with those colors and see what happens. Thanks!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                    Whoops sideways… this one is obviously not a drive through but a walkthrough it’s been cut into an old stump, so it’s not a living tree anymore.
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                                    • Larue
                                      Larue last edited by

                                      Coming in late but loving them all. The bright colors, textures and imagination are all great! Seems like you are overflowing with ideas, lucky you!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Still working on characters lol
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                                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                          Not sure what else I can do here needs something else though I think…
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                                            Frogpunzel @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos This is great, I love the colors! The only issue I feel there might be is that my eye is drawn to the awesome lighting around the tree and less on the characters.

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