Personal projects feedback please:|

[Asyas_illos]

@Jeremy-Ross awesome thanks Jeremy!

[Asyas_illos]

Still chipping at this one

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Think I’m done with this one

[MelissaJacie]

@Asyas_illos I like this background tree branch! Nice work there! Inspiring.

[Asyas_illos]

@MelissaJacie thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

Starting a spread for Hansel and Gretel

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Just got some heads to do lol

[Asyas_illos]

Wrapped this up today!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Asyas_illos This is looking great!

[Asyas_illos]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks

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So i did away with the carousel and went with this instead. I need to do more spot illustrations I realized, for my portfolio… so here we are… again… lol

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Ok finished with this one do You think it’s portfolio material?

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[Asyas_illos]

I was doing this piece for my portfolio but I read up on the upcoming critique arenas and thought I could amend my original concept a tiny bit to fit the prompt cloud. Does anything stand out as far as composition or story, etc.? I plan to add rain in the last steps.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@Asyas_illos I like the simplified buildings in the background. The main thing is that I am not sure of the concept. Why is there a cloud? Does he have a cloud/rain over him because of the ice cream? Was he angry but becoming happy because of the ice cream? If so, to me it doesn't read that way yet. I also see that you wrote rainbow off to the side, what story are you trying to tell with that?

[Asyas_illos]

@Kim-Rosenlof so my concept is that instead of a grumpy rain cloud it’s going to be a bright cloud with a rainbow shining upon him, the rain I mentioned earlier will be be everywhere except his happy little bubble, does that work? there will be color only in that area.