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  • Asyas_illos
    Asyas_illos last edited by 16 Jul 2022, 20:56

    Still chipping at this one
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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 18 Jul 2022, 04:34 16 Jul 2022, 22:02

      Think I’m done with this one😊
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      Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply 19 Jul 2022, 11:45 Reply Quote 7
      • MelissaJacie
        MelissaJacie @Asyas_illos last edited by 17 Jul 2022, 02:22

        @Asyas_illos I like this background tree branch! Nice work there! Inspiring.

        Melissa Jacie Art
        melissajacie@gmail.com
        melissajacie.com

        Asyas_illos 1 Reply Last reply 17 Jul 2022, 20:37 Reply Quote 1
        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @MelissaJacie last edited by 17 Jul 2022, 20:37

          @MelissaJacie thank you!

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by 17 Jul 2022, 20:38

            Starting a spread for Hansel and Gretel
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 18 Jul 2022, 04:36 18 Jul 2022, 00:10

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by 18 Jul 2022, 22:54

                Just got some heads to do lol
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by 19 Jul 2022, 00:59

                  Wrapped this up today!
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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by 19 Jul 2022, 11:45

                    @Asyas_illos This is looking great! ❤

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

                    Asyas_illos 1 Reply Last reply 19 Jul 2022, 14:40 Reply Quote 1
                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by 19 Jul 2022, 14:40

                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks 😊

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by 20 Jul 2022, 05:09

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 20 Jul 2022, 22:06 20 Jul 2022, 20:28

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by 21 Jul 2022, 00:06

                            So i did away with the carousel and went with this instead. I need to do more spot illustrations I realized, for my portfolio… so here we are… again… lol
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by 21 Jul 2022, 03:23

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 21 Jul 2022, 17:36 21 Jul 2022, 17:22

                                Ok finished with this one do You think it’s portfolio material?
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 23 Jul 2022, 03:17 22 Jul 2022, 20:59

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by 2 Aug 2022, 01:56

                                    I was doing this piece for my portfolio but I read up on the upcoming critique arenas and thought I could amend my original concept a tiny bit to fit the prompt cloud. Does anything stand out as far as composition or story, etc.? I plan to add rain in the last steps.
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                                    Kim Rosenlof 1 Reply Last reply 2 Aug 2022, 03:50 Reply Quote 2
                                    • Kim Rosenlof
                                      Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by 2 Aug 2022, 03:50

                                      @Asyas_illos I like the simplified buildings in the background. The main thing is that I am not sure of the concept. Why is there a cloud? Does he have a cloud/rain over him because of the ice cream? Was he angry but becoming happy because of the ice cream? If so, to me it doesn't read that way yet. I also see that you wrote rainbow off to the side, what story are you trying to tell with that?

                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by 2 Aug 2022, 04:53

                                        @Kim-Rosenlof so my concept is that instead of a grumpy rain cloud it’s going to be a bright cloud with a rainbow shining upon him, the rain I mentioned earlier will be be everywhere except his happy little bubble, does that work? there will be color only in that area.

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by 11 Aug 2022, 16:52

                                          So I’m revisiting some older illustrations and giving them a makeover, lol, first up is this “down the rabbit hole”. I really like it already but there are a few things that can be fixed and updated.
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