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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

      Ok I thinned out the border and fixed his expression also removed the yellow that was in the background. I tried moving my name around and just have my name but to me it just didn’t look right. So this is where it’s at currently I’m gonna let sit for a while while continue to work on the story and sketches. Thank you @Miriam for your suggestions, but I really like the title as it is for now, we’ll see when I come back to it again later. Thanks for the feedback everyone!
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      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Wondering what you guys think about this lighting? Is it too much? To chaotic, busy?
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        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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        • kirsten-mcg
          kirsten-mcg @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I love scenes like this where the same character is shown multiple times to crate movement! I'm curious what it would look like if you reduced the saturation of the lights a little, but left Alice and the other objects more saturated. I can't decide if its too much or not, and I feel like looking at two versions side by side would help!

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @kirsten-mcg last edited by

            @kirsten-mcg I didn’t do a toned down version yet but I have this alternative lighting too
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            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Ok made some side by side comps thoughts?
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              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

              Miriam KevinTreaccar kayleenartlover 3 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • Miriam
                Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos I like #1

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                • KevinTreaccar
                  KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos I agree on preferring the left side (1 and 2). I could just be missing the light source, but I'm just not sure where the purple light is coming from. There's nothing distracting on 1. Love the image overall.

                  kevintreaccar.com
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                    @KevinTreaccar thanks for the feedback! my mind was just playing off the scene where she’s falling and there are flashing colors but they never came any specific light source.

                    Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                    www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                    https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                    • kayleenartlover
                      kayleenartlover @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos number 2, the middle right one, I think has just the right amount of colored lighting

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @kayleenartlover last edited by

                        Thanks @kayleenartlover 😊

                        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos hi! i think the first lighting is perfect. it's psychedelic and imo is perfect for Alice in Wonderland

                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks for the feedback!

                            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              Hey guys I’ve been working on setting up a website using wix. It’s been frustrating! But I think I’ve got it I plan on switching to a personal domain soon, but for now just borrowing the wix site one. It’s VERY simple. I’d like some feedback on it please, accessibility, design, illustrations I should remove or rearrange, etc . Thanks guys😊

                              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

                              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

                              AngelinaKizz Kim Rosenlof Miriam mag 4 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 0
                              • AngelinaKizz
                                AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos great job! I really struggled with learning how to builds mine through Wordpress, and now that I understand what I’m doing, it’s much easier to work with. I think the one thing I would vary up, is at the bottom you have a cluster of black and white images. I think I would shift them to be sprinkled throughout the colored pieces.

                                www.evarartistry.com
                                www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                  @AngelinaKizz awesome thanks! Yes I’m not very good with computers in general and I was creating it with my iPad, so let’s just say it was my fifth attempt. 😂

                                  Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                  www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                  https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                  • AngelinaKizz
                                    AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos oh man, me either! I find that it's easier going through the web browser rather than the app for WordPress. The app I was ripping my hair out. Are you using an app?

                                    www.evarartistry.com
                                    www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by Asyas_illos

                                      @AngelinaKizz no it was web based still a major pain. I tried at first with square space only to find it wasn’t compatible with my iPad and I could not transfer any of my pictures, good grief!

                                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                      • AngelinaKizz
                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos brutal!!! You've done a great job so far though

                                        www.evarartistry.com
                                        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                          @AngelinaKizz lol thanks😊

                                          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                          • Kim Rosenlof
                                            Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos I think your site looks good. It is good to have a site that starts with the gallery of illustrations, so people don’t have to search for it. I didn’t see anything that I would remove or rearrange, but I am also not a portfolio expert so I am not sure the best way to arrange things. The only thing I have heard is to put your best piece first. You have a lot of great pieces so it is hard to choose.

                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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