New Drawing Critiques Welcome
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@Melissa_Bailey Hey there! very nice! I'll work on these things for sure and get back to you
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@Kori-Jensen you’re welcome! Glad it helped.
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@Melissa_Bailey Hey Melissa! Here are my edits, what do you think?
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@Kori-Jensen nice work!
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This piece brings me back to my days playing Baldur's Gate 2. Your pic reminds me of a certain pink hair thief/mage. I have a few suggestions; hope you don't mind the draw over.
I would recommend redrawing the left arm, so it would frame the character, as shown. Having her hold onto the right side of the cape also drawers eyes to the potions, reminding people of her job class.
If you use Photoshop, I would recommend using warp on the texture for the shoulder guard. As it is, it is breaking the illusion of a curved form.
I meant to write this in your other post... I like your DnD work. Is it possible to combine your love of fantasy with children's books? There are a lot of kiddie books these days based on adult properties (Home Alone, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, X-Files, etc).
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@willicreate Holy guacamole
I love your suggestions, hmm perhaps I should pass my line art by you next time LOL. Do you mind? These are some great ideas. Thank you!!! -
@willicreate hmmm I do agree some people find my work more attuned to the adult and youth groups but I feel there is a place for my work
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@Kori-Jensen I'm glad that was helpful. I'd be honored to provide any further assistance in your quest
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@Kori-Jensen Understood. All the best.
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@willicreate Thank you so much I look forward to your thoughts
