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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

      @Kim-Rosenlof thanks! I really am enjoying this one!

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        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

        Does his expression look like he doesn’t know he’s the scary thing and is looking behind him like there’s something else to be scared of? Lol that was exhausting just writing it😅
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          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Still not sure if the story is coming through… also do you think the background props are too distracting?
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            ArtistErin @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos I think the props help anchor the scene, which helps show he's a ghost and it makes sense... maybe you could have the ghost crouched, like he could be holding the shoulders of the last person in the line, as he's looking behind him to add to the idea he has no idea he's the scary thing in the room. Ha ha ha I love this idea! Sorta reminds me of the movie The Others.

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            • Chantal Goetheer
              Chantal Goetheer @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos the props help me too see him as a ghost. At first without the props I though it looks like dad that is somehow lit differently, even though I know it should be a ghost. i love how he also seems to be peaking around for scary stuff. Somehow his face makes me think of him more of being their dad instead of a ghost. But now im also wondering how a ghost would look like 😀

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                Chantal Goetheer @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos I'm sure you're going to have great chances again at winning! It does look great.

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                • AngelinaKizz
                  AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos this one is my favourite so far! Great job

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                    Asyas_illos @ArtistErin last edited by

                    @ArtistErin thanks for the feedback , I love that movie!

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                      Asyas_illos @Chantal Goetheer last edited by

                      @Chantal-Goetheer thank you!

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                        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                        @AngelinaKizz thank you!😊

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