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Help me choose the proper line thickness, please?

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  • mag
    mag Pro SVS OG last edited by mag 3 Dec 2022, 10:49 3 Dec 2022, 10:24

    Hi art folks!

    I am working on some character art for a possible book project of mine and cannot decide, what line thickness would go better with my art?
    Do you prefer character A or B?
    It's going to be a humorous early readers book, with illustrations on every page, some full bleed, some just spots, some in color, some B&W. And I'm not sure how thick my ink lines should be...

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    Thank you so much! It might sound silly, but believe me, it's hard to decide! 😅

    Mag
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    tomparsonsart KevinTreaccar Chantal Goetheer kirsten-mcg Jeremy Ross 5 Replies Last reply 3 Dec 2022, 20:09 Reply Quote 0
    • tomparsonsart
      tomparsonsart @mag last edited by tomparsonsart 3 Dec 2022, 13:30 3 Dec 2022, 12:31

      @mag I like the thinner one, B. The thicker one seems like it was added afterward which makes it look kind of blurry to me. There seems to be more variation in the thinner one. Really nice drawing!

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      • KevinTreaccar
        KevinTreaccar @mag last edited by KevinTreaccar 4 Dec 2022, 23:47 3 Dec 2022, 13:01

        @mag I agree on B. The line work feels a little dominant to me with A.

        I like A. If you were pairing A with a simpler rendering style – such as no shading or a minimal color scheme – I think it would work real well.

        But with the rest of your work on A and B, I prefer A (edit: I meant B here).

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        • Chantal Goetheer
          Chantal Goetheer @mag last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 13:07

          @mag my son voted for A

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          • Rachel Horne
            Rachel Horne last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 15:18

            I would say B too

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            • kirsten-mcg
              kirsten-mcg @mag last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 15:24

              @mag I think B. For some reason to me A feels a little unfinished, like it's a concept sketch. B feels finished. I especially like it with the color added.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos 3 Dec 2022, 16:00 3 Dec 2022, 15:57

                I prefer b also, I agree that a feels A bit blurred, makes my eyes struggle.

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                • ArtistErin
                  ArtistErin last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 18:50

                  I tend to like B better, it feels more refined and easier to see characters.

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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @mag last edited by 3 Dec 2022, 20:09

                    Hi @mag , I like B rendered, but A is better for B&W if you plan to accompany the book with some coloring pages for kiddos.

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                    • Sarah VanDam
                      Sarah VanDam last edited by Sarah VanDam 4 Dec 2022, 05:58 4 Dec 2022, 05:53

                      I can see why this is tough to decide—I could see a place for both styles. “A” looks a little more like it belongs in a comic, maybe, and B feels slightly more geared toward a picture book. I will say, though, that even though I see what people mean when they say that “A” feels “blurrier,” it does, at the same time, seem to lend itself well to a humorous, silly story, maybe slightly more so than B, which feels more quiet and sweet.

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