24 Jun 2023, 23:48

I'm finally editing it, using both critiques as references, from @Jake-Parker and @davidhohn.
This is what I got so far:
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Also, I drew this on Procreate so I had to use different techniques for some of it. But I think it's going well! I had an "ah-ha" moment when I saw rim lighting as an option, and same moment when I saw how moonlight through a window would help explain what they are looking at out of view. Sometimes I'm so set on what colors I want to use I don't think to mess with it further. But seeing the changes made it very clear on where it was unfinished, so I'm very glad that I get to make those changes myself now.