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November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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  • AngelinaKizz
    AngelinaKizz last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 04:06

    Heres my submission for HTFYA November
    penguinscanfly.jpg

    www.evarartistry.com
    www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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    • Larue
      Larue last edited by Larue 30 Oct 2023, 05:35 25 Oct 2023, 06:26

      Flight! Gave up two days of Inktober to focus on this one. Had fun with the lighting.IMG_0377.jpeg

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      • Fey Realme
        Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme 2 Nov 2023, 22:31 25 Oct 2023, 06:52

        IMG_3096.jpeg

        Hey guys, I shoehorned the prompt into my own october art challenge where i am doing a few different things in tandem to hone in on my illustration weaknesses and discover new ways to work. My biggest struggle is my most recent bout of “how the kek do I render stuff!?” I am mostly a drawer of flat more cartoony figures, but my brain’s default rendering setting is realistic Painting (renaissance era) which i am not nor ever have been good at. I have been trying to embrace flat cell shading and color contrast, but i always feel i should add highlights and halftones and shadows—realistic modeling you know?
        I am realizing that you can use shadows to ground characters and connect them to backgrounds without needing to go full on realistic, but figuring out how to do that in my work is difficult. This is my most recent attempt at figuring that out. I ended up making a screen layer on top of everything, and selecting the local color of each element and painting some sort of indication of where the light is hitting them.

        Any and all instruction, philosophizing, critique, information, or diagnosis is appreciated.
        Which svs learn class would you prescribe me?

        Edit: here is another piece I forgot i had, but it fit the prompt and i couldn’t help but share—its going to be the cover of a little zine I'm making about tips for traveling that i learned during my experience traveling to France with my husband, baby, and sister. I suppose i should put passports somewhere to make that clearer. #1 thing i relearned: flying is a nightmare.
        IMG_3149.jpeg

        Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
        Coloring page newsletter: https://bit.ly/Color-in

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        • Robyn Hepburn
          Robyn Hepburn last edited by Robyn Hepburn 1 Nov 2023, 15:15 25 Oct 2023, 12:11

          I've loved admiring all the submissions. Looking forward to the next installment of HTFYA.

          Flight for SVS Nov RHepburn.jpg

          (Just because ostriches are faster than horses, doesn't mean they make a good getaway vehicle.)

          https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
          www.robynhepburn.com

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          • MerryMary
            MerryMary last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 18:06

            Chicken and Geese 2.jpg

            Had a lot of fun with this one. I am sure there are many improvements that could make it better!

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            • alexw
              alexw @MerryMary last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 19:51

              @MerryMary This came out fantastic!! 🙂 So cool to see your sketch previously and now it's rendered out!

              https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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              • Malachi Hudelson
                Malachi Hudelson last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 20:28

                IMG_12457AC76931-1.jpeg

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                • Malachi Hudelson
                  Malachi Hudelson @AustinShurtliff last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 20:34

                  @AustinShurtliff IMG_12457AC76931-1.jpeg

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                  • MerryMary
                    MerryMary @alexw last edited by 25 Oct 2023, 22:37

                    @alexw thanks so much! 😀

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                    • Robyn Hepburn
                      Robyn Hepburn last edited by 26 Oct 2023, 11:42

                      @Annika-Wenzel @AngelinaKizz Beautiful wings, both of you! 😍

                      https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
                      www.robynhepburn.com

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                      • AustinShurtliff
                        AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Malachi Hudelson last edited by 26 Oct 2023, 21:55

                        @Malachi-Hudelson great work!

                        Austin Shurtliff
                        austin@svslearn.com

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                        • alexw
                          alexw last edited by alexw 31 Oct 2023, 15:44 26 Oct 2023, 23:46

                          Here is my submission for "Flight" HTFYA in November! 20 hours of work!

                          Wendy's_Airplane_-_Final.jpg

                          EDIT: I was given some great advice to provide the black and white version. I really tried to understand how black and white values translate into color. I realized that sky is not light grey but close to 30-40% grey it seems.

                          WIP6 Wendy's Airplane Grayscale.jpg

                          Looking forward to the critique!

                          https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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                          • ksfabian
                            ksfabian last edited by 27 Oct 2023, 22:36

                            IMG_1881.jpeg

                            ksfabiancreations.com

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                              Tamzin @AustinShurtliff last edited by 28 Oct 2023, 14:54

                              @AustinShurtliff - it’s lovely to see all the different interpretations:) - I would love some feedback on mine- this is part of a series I am doing on a story of Catworld- any and all feedback appreciated thank you- this was done in procreate- thanks! TamzinIMG_2533.jpeg

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                              • Jackson Adams
                                Jackson Adams last edited by 30 Oct 2023, 15:38

                                flight.jpg

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                                • dinky
                                  dinky last edited by 30 Oct 2023, 18:59

                                  IMG_2313.jpeg

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                                    HollyOakley @amaryllis last edited by 30 Oct 2023, 20:47

                                    @amaryllis soooo good. Love the story!!

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                                    • Ryan
                                      Ryan last edited by 31 Oct 2023, 01:00

                                      Hello all! I've followed 3PP since the first episode; so thankful for the direction 3PP/SVS has provided over the years.
                                      This is my first time submitting a post for HTFYA... it's tempting to want to explain my process/intention behind this, but if it doesn't read clearly without commentary then that probably means I have a bit more work to do! 🙂 So grateful for any critique and feedback - it can be painful, that's okay! That's how I'm going to grow. 🙂

                                      Thank you so much for the chance to submit and be a part of HTFYA.

                                      Book_A_Ride.jpg

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                                      • TheresaMuth
                                        TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by 31 Oct 2023, 01:39

                                        FInal -- I'll post some other versions in another Thread... I'm not sure this one is the best, but it was the Final version. Whew!Theresa Muth HTFYA-23-Nov Final.jpg

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                                        • Jason Crowley
                                          Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley 31 Oct 2023, 02:54 31 Oct 2023, 02:51

                                          I had a few ideas for the flight prompt, here's another one. This time mixing traditional and digital.

                                          Flight2-Jason-Crowley.jpg

                                          https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                                          https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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