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    Crit Welcome: Character Designs x5!

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    • ArtistErin
      ArtistErin last edited by

      I love these! I don't have any suggestions... just noting your clean lines and fantastic characters. Love that Beast... the mask is great! Very cool 🙂

      Erin Richardson
      instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
      www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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      • Kona McDonald
        Kona McDonald last edited by

        Great character designs, they are all very unique to each other, and it's easy to see which character they are representing in Beauty & the Beast.

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        • AthenaBeana
          AthenaBeana @StudioHannah last edited by

          @StudioHannah These are really cool! My favorite is the stick armed one.

          Can I make a suggestion though? The two characters on the ends have a similar color palate with the various shades of browns. Maybe you could give the girl some orange or red on her outfit to be more visually distinct.
          I don't know if this is on purpose, but to me the bully looks very similar to a lot of high school bullies in pop culture. Blond hair, square face, jock look, etc. Maybe consider changing his design somewhat so he doesn't look quite so much like a classic bully.

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          • StudioHannah
            StudioHannah @Meg Clayburn last edited by

            @Meg-Clayburn Aaaah oh, I see what you mean. The drawing helped!

            www.studiohannah.com
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            • StudioHannah
              StudioHannah @AthenaBeana last edited by

              @AthenaBeana They come from the same town so I wanted to keep the "we come fro the same poor-ish area and only have so many colors of clothing to choose from" look but I can definitely mess around with them to make them more unique. Thanks for the suggestions!

              www.studiohannah.com
              Social:
              www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
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              • StudioHannah
                StudioHannah last edited by

                Thanks to everyones advice I did a second round for these characters with a bunch of adjustments and I think they look a lot better!

                Untitled_Artwork.jpg

                www.studiohannah.com
                Social:
                www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
                www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
                www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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                • _sadira_
                  _sadira_ last edited by

                  @StudioHannah great second round for the character lineup! I love how diverse and unique the cast is, all of the character's silhouettes would be easily recognizable not to mention the clear shape language with them.

                  sadira.artstation.com
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                  • ArtistErin
                    ArtistErin @StudioHannah last edited by

                    @StudioHannah I love how you are improving! Working on a character sheet too! And building maquettes 🙂 So fun

                    Erin Richardson
                    instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                    www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                    • StudioHannah
                      StudioHannah @ArtistErin last edited by

                      @ArtistErin I've designed characters and I've sculpted, but I've never made a maquette. You would think that would have crossed over for me by now hahaha - I hope yours go well! I want to see them them you're done!

                      www.studiohannah.com
                      Social:
                      www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
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                      www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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                      • StudioHannah
                        StudioHannah @_sadira_ last edited by

                        @_sadira_ Thank you so much! 😃

                        www.studiohannah.com
                        Social:
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                        www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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