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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

      Hi Marsha! I think it's awesome that you are tackling this book again and aiming for finish. The text is a lot of fun and I like the character of uncle Carl. Way to go!

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

        @smceccarelli Thanks a lot.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG last edited by

          Going to be gone all day but I woke up early and did a bit of prep for inking tomorrow so, just checking in. Now I need to go back to bed and try to sleep a couple hours so I can make it through the day and night!

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          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

            Today's work.

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            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • demotlj
              demotlj SVS OG last edited by

              Wow, you are really zipping now! Great stuff and it’s fun watching the story develop.

              Laurie DeMott
              instagram.com/demotlj

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                @demotlj πŸ™‚ Thanks. It feels good so far πŸ™‚

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                  Went to visit my sister this morning so only got one done today. I know it's not perfect but...it's whatI can do right now....pushing on!

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                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might do this one over.

                    I did do it over. Still not pefect but I'm okay with this one. Not okay with the last one...though the other photo is much better and clearer. I'm not a photographer πŸ™‚

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                    I need to fix the tangent where the knee and leg meet too, I see that now. Photoshop.

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                      Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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                      I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

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                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                        Here's my work for today. That's nine chickens!
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                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          My work today. Not going to work out I don't think. This one will take m esome more time as I am trying to reposition it.........Oh well....pushing on.

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                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • K
                            Kat SVS OG last edited by

                            It's looking like a cute story! Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all these chickens πŸ™‚

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

                              @kat Thanks πŸ™‚ Still plugging away πŸ™‚

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                Finished this today.

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                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                  I did make some progress today with sketching.

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                                  The second image didn't post.....the sketches of Uncle Carl running. It's okay. I made a decision on that and will start inking soon.

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might redo this one......

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • MOO
                                      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                      Here are my two inkings for today. I'm starting to feel like these aren't that great again but I'm pushing ahead. Not sure if I should or not but....the cow is giving me some trouble again too....I hope I'm not giving in on this too soon. I believe someone else could do so much better but, it's my project so I am going to do it anyway. I am going to work on figure drawing and review the class on positioning characters again and also watch the visualizing perspective class. I'm a little embarrassed by these.....

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                                      One of them is not posting. I'll try again later.

                                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                        This is the other one. Just being accountable.

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                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                          Guess what! I actually finished my cow. Not perfect, but it will do fo rme. Much better than it was. Sorry for the fuzzy picture.

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                                          And this is the last illustration of the book! Now, I need to do the cover and a few touch ups, etc.

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                                          Then I will prepare to paint a lot. Whew! Still a lot to do but I am going to say this part is done.

                                          Woohoo!

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • Eli
                                            Eli last edited by

                                            wow! Great job! That's huge, being done with the drawing stage. They look great--especially this last one. I LOVE that cow's expression!

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