Music WIP: Comments Appreciated

burvantill

@jabbernewt Thankyou for the tips on focus. The feedback from everyone is so helpful.

burvantill

So the other day after I post the two above I walked away from it for a while and when I came back I changed a couple things and added a bunch. It's really rough and loose because I wasn't sure if I was going to keep it. Kinda a quick "let's see what this looks like" kind of thing. Now today I'm reading the posts from @imrush and @Jabbernewt and started laughing because you guys justified my thoughts. Lol! THANK YOU! Like I said it's really rough, but I would still like your comments. The daisy and balloon on the far right bottom will be adjusted, FYI.

chrisaakins

@burvantill Ahhh. I hate to say it, but I liked it better without the closest foreground elements. That is just my two cents. I feel like that is all my eye is drawn to. I do like the balloons though.

burvantill

@chrisaakins good to know, thanx! I appreciate the honesty.

braden H

The foreground elements are a good idea in theory. I agree with @chrisaakins that in this particular way they don't seem to work, though. I may play with it a little before discarding the idea entirely.

burvantill

How bout this?

Chip Valecek

@burvantill I think its coming along great. I like it. The specs on the piece what do you plan to do with them? I was thinking colored confetti would be a nice touch.

chrisaakins

@burvantill I like it!

Jason Bowen

Looks great, the only thing I would move is the balloon thats almost in the drummers face at the back. I would be tempted to move it above him or further forward just so he has a bit of room.

The energy is great in this, great work.

burvantill

@jason-bowen Thank you for the comment. If you are referring to the balloon that is in the drummer bear's face, that one is intentional. He is leaning his head back because its there. I will try to exaggerate that since its not translating. =)x

burvantill

@chip-valecek natural confetti, FLOWERS. LOL! like little cherry blossoms flitting about.

burvantill

@chrisaakins Thanx! I could not have done it without everyones help! =)x
Now for the watercolors!!!