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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator last edited by

      More more! This is great!

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

        If you added a persons shadow on the ground, maybe wearing a fedora hat with four long knives for figers (ya know like Freddy Krueger) it would turn from a warm fuzzy dream to something creepy.


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        • TessaW
          TessaW last edited by

          Looks finished to me and I really love this illustration.

          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

            This looks fantastic. Throw that bad boy into your portfolio.

            http://www.palacioillustration.com/

            https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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            • Pinky
              Pinky last edited by

              I like it very much -- reminds me of Chris Van Allsburg. 🙂

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              • KathrynAdebayo
                KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                Wow, I think this is fantastic! Maybe extend the giraffes' legs down behind the fence? Unless, of course, there's intentionality in the way that the giraffes are visible above the fence but not through it. I really appreciate the way this piece invites the viewer to imagine a story to go with it.

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                • Maureen
                  Maureen SVS OG @Eric Castleman last edited by

                  Wonderful work, @eric-castleman It reminds me of certain movie scenes where the background is subdued with the main action/character in color, etc. There's one image online of Wonder Woman charging through muted devastation in the background. About the only thing that slightly bothers me is what seems to be a lack of eyes on the baby and on the adult at left -- or maybe I just can't see if on my screen. Amazing, as always.

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