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    • Jon Anderson
      Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

      I like B best, too. The white line just adds a little confusion for me.

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        I think in this case option B works best, here.

        They're both good, but I'd definitely go with the version without outlines.

        Maybe softer outlines? Like on their own layer at 30% opacity using a nice green-ish colour?

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        • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
          Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

          I like B too. The slime is really fun. There should be more slime in kids books!

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          • carriecopadraws
            carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

            I think style A has potential to look like a 3D layered paper style and is worth exploring. It reminded me of these 3D Magic cards some people make with several cutout layers to give it depth:

            0_1541039741586_cutout-layered.jpg

            Or Paper Mario! It could be a fun look.

            0_1541039878733_paper-mario.jpg

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            • TessaW
              TessaW last edited by TessaW

              Wow Chip, I really love how this one turned out! The color palette, linework, and subtle texture are really appealing. I first viewed this on my phone and liked A initially, but after looking at it on my desktop, I'm leaning toward B. I am sort of wondering what it would look like with the dark splatters on A, but without the white outlines. Something about those splatters gives it a lot of energy and interest.

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              • Adrian K
                Adrian K last edited by

                I vote for B, although I do like the splatters.

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator last edited by

                  I want to like A but I’m going to vote B.
                  This turned out really good. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

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                  • LauraA
                    LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                    I like B too.

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                    • lenwen
                      lenwen last edited by

                      They both great! but I prefer B 😃

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                      • Chip Valecek
                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                        Thanks everyone! B seems to be the clear winner. I suppose the white outline worked well with my inktobers because it was just the character and not a full illustration. @TessaW and @Adrian-K here is a version with just the splatters.

                        0_1541072287803_final_v3.jpg


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