WIP-Silhouette/Foreground Watercolor

NessIllustration

I think the black silhouettes are really taking over and taking the spotlight, however the color is really appealing and brings out the others! At first when you said you were adding a foreground element I started shaking my head, but when I scrolled and saw your tests I went "Ohhhhhh!" Hahaha..
Here's what I'd do:

It's a GORGEOUS piece, congratulations!!

julian beresford

@kaitlinmakes I really like the branches in the foreground, it frames the picture well, I pretty much concur with Ness's observations

kaitlinmakes

@julian-beresford
@NessIllustration
haha - no, I agree - the black is terrible - but it's the only color marker that held up on the acetate. I think I'm going to go with a darker brown/green or brown/purple - But I haven't moved over to color studies yet.
Is the suggestion to mostly chop off the bottom third and keep the foreground branches low in the picture frame?

Thank you so much for chiming in, you two!

NessIllustration

@kaitlinmakes I actually love the black! It's going a bit purple on the edges, it's beautiful It's just a bit voluminous, hence the suggestion to chop off the bottom. With the new comp, the bird sits on the thirds of the picture in both directions so the focus is clearly on him@

kaitlinmakes

@nessillustration
Brilliant - I got your drift now!

burvantill

I like the black mockups. The top one more than the bottom. If you keep the dark value but add dimension to the branches with low key value of light and shadow I think that would be wonderful. Bring some of the great colors from the top into the dark but using a darker value version of them. Very pretty.

demotlj

Beautiful work - stunning colors and very evocative. The original is top heavy and I think the framing with the branches really helps that but I agree with @NessIllustration on the cropping.

kaitlinmakes

I just wanted to give a quick update and thank everyone for chiming in. For some reason foregrounds give me a straight up mental block and I just can't wrap my mind around them when it's time to doooo it.
But I appreciate the feedback, the kind words and the encouragement.
I did the whole scene just to see what it could look like - but I do agree with the cropping at the end. I tried to do subtle value changes and to express light, but it all quickly got away from me.
Mahalo.

Nyrryl Cadiz

Hi! This might be too late but I actually like the first version without the trees and roots. The bottom half might look empty but that’s the piece’s way of remaining in balanced. It’s an inbalanced balance.

Nyrryl Cadiz

As for the new cropped piece though, I think it’s cropped a bit too high. It would be nice to see more of those gnarled roots but not all of them.

Whitney Simms

I like the bottom one the best. It’s got the right amount of foreground. I also like the translucent nature of the new elements. It will look beautiful when you add it in watercolor.

kaitlinmakes

@nyrrylcadiz @Whitney-Simms
Haha well it is too late to pull back the foreground, but I didn't have the heart to take scissors to it yet! But I'm so glad you two spoke, because I felt uneasy about the crop.
I've always liked pieces with long bare bottoms, so I'll keep playing with that idea.