Mouth or no mouth?

[NessIllustration]

Where you going to put that mouth though? The title is kind of using that space..

[rcartwright]

@nessillustration no his mouth would fall above the title

[NessIllustration]

@rcartwright Ohhhh I see! Uhm.. I think.. Why not? Try it, you'll see if it works And post it here so we can compare!

[braden H]

I suppose you could always put in a pair of glowing eyes instead of a mouth

[rcartwright]

@art-of-b I'm trying to stay away rom the eyes because I want a horror vibe but to also stay true to the original concept and his eyes are really funny and sweet.

[kaitlinmakes]

@rcartwright
Yes! Try it and show it to us! Also since this looks like a poster - maybe try making the font look like his teeth

[braden H]

@rcartwright Well then I say yes to the teeth If the word dentist is on the cover, you gotta have teeth.

[burvantill]

Yes Mouth.

[demotlj]

I also vote for a mouth.

[robgale]

@rcartwright Yes Mouth.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Just a suggestion. Since this story is about a dentist and the monster and his teeth, i think it would be best to show more hints of that. So yes on the teeth.