Mouth or no mouth?
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@nessillustration no his mouth would fall above the title
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@rcartwright Ohhhh I see! Uhm.. I think.. Why not? Try it, you'll see if it works
And post it here so we can compare! -
I suppose you could always put in a pair of glowing eyes instead of a mouth

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@art-of-b I'm trying to stay away rom the eyes because I want a horror vibe but to also stay true to the original concept and his eyes are really funny and sweet.
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@rcartwright
Yes! Try it and show it to us! Also since this looks like a poster - maybe try making the font look like his teeth -
@rcartwright Well then I say yes to the teeth
If the word dentist is on the cover, you gotta have teeth. -
Yes Mouth.

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I also vote for a mouth.
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@rcartwright Yes Mouth.
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Just a suggestion. Since this story is about a dentist and the monster and his teeth, i think it would be best to show more hints of that. So yes on the teeth.