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    • rcartwright
      rcartwright @NessIllustration last edited by

      @nessillustration no his mouth would fall above the title

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      • NessIllustration
        NessIllustration Pro @rcartwright last edited by

        @rcartwright Ohhhh I see! Uhm.. I think.. Why not? Try it, you'll see if it works 🙂 And post it here so we can compare!

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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          I suppose you could always put in a pair of glowing eyes instead of a mouth 🙂

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          • rcartwright
            rcartwright @braden H last edited by

            @art-of-b I'm trying to stay away rom the eyes because I want a horror vibe but to also stay true to the original concept and his eyes are really funny and sweet.

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            • kaitlinmakes
              kaitlinmakes @rcartwright last edited by

              @rcartwright
              Yes! Try it and show it to us! Also since this looks like a poster - maybe try making the font look like his teeth

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              • braden H
                braden H @rcartwright last edited by

                @rcartwright Well then I say yes to the teeth 🙂 If the word dentist is on the cover, you gotta have teeth.

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator last edited by

                  Yes Mouth. 👍

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    I also vote for a mouth.

                    Laurie DeMott
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                    • robgale
                      robgale @rcartwright last edited by

                      @rcartwright Yes Mouth.

                      Rob Gale
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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                        Just a suggestion. Since this story is about a dentist and the monster and his teeth, i think it would be best to show more hints of that. So yes on the teeth.

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