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    • rcartwright
      rcartwright last edited by

      Before I start coloring and adding texture I'm wondering if I should give Bumble a mouth. Originally0_1544303784997_d.jpg

      I wasn't going to give him a face (inspired by The Thing posters from the 80's) but now I'm thinking he needs his mouth full of sharp teeth

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      • NessIllustration
        NessIllustration Pro last edited by

        Where you going to put that mouth though? The title is kind of using that space..

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        • rcartwright
          rcartwright @NessIllustration last edited by

          @nessillustration no his mouth would fall above the title

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          • NessIllustration
            NessIllustration Pro @rcartwright last edited by

            @rcartwright Ohhhh I see! Uhm.. I think.. Why not? Try it, you'll see if it works 🙂 And post it here so we can compare!

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              I suppose you could always put in a pair of glowing eyes instead of a mouth 🙂

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              • rcartwright
                rcartwright @braden H last edited by

                @art-of-b I'm trying to stay away rom the eyes because I want a horror vibe but to also stay true to the original concept and his eyes are really funny and sweet.

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                • kaitlinmakes
                  kaitlinmakes @rcartwright last edited by

                  @rcartwright
                  Yes! Try it and show it to us! Also since this looks like a poster - maybe try making the font look like his teeth

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @rcartwright last edited by

                    @rcartwright Well then I say yes to the teeth 🙂 If the word dentist is on the cover, you gotta have teeth.

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                    • burvantill
                      burvantill Moderator last edited by

                      Yes Mouth. 👍

                      Lisa Burvant
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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                        I also vote for a mouth.

                        Laurie DeMott
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                        • robgale
                          robgale @rcartwright last edited by

                          @rcartwright Yes Mouth.

                          Rob Gale
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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                            Just a suggestion. Since this story is about a dentist and the monster and his teeth, i think it would be best to show more hints of that. So yes on the teeth.

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