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    WIM Book Cover "The Wind in the Willows"

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    • KathrynAdebayo
      KathrynAdebayo last edited by KathrynAdebayo

      Your version with less rocks looks like a finished work to me. So nice. 🙂 Though maybe the value of the bottom of the background trees is a bit strong? This is really looking amazing.

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

        @KathrynAdebayo Cool, I'll try lighting up the background trees and see how it looks 🙂

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          Okay! Working on back now. What you all think? I was thinking about putting in some more elements, but I've been finding this piece likes to be simple. Maybe add a bird or two in the branches?

          Screen Shot 2019-03-19 at 3.38.08 PM.png

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          • Erin.Cortese
            Erin.Cortese Moderator @Elizabeth Rose last edited by Erin.Cortese

            @Squirrelsize Beautiful! Your design is very well thought out and very nicely balanced.

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              Yey! I'm getting really excited! This has been a fun piece! Still open to changes however. You all see anything that bothers you that I should change up?

              These are my edits from the last several post:

              I lighted up the background trees on the front cover.
              Switch the willow tree on the back to the right side of the page.
              Put clothes and a tail on Ratty

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              • MichaelaH
                MichaelaH last edited by

                It looks really good!!!

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @MichaelaH last edited by

                  @MichaelaH Hahaha, Thanks 🙂

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                  • djly
                    djly last edited by

                    Wow, I can't believe how far this piece came. You've really worked hard on this and it shows. Really beautiful work, you should be proud!

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose @djly last edited by

                      @djly AWE, thanks so much girl!

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                      • Elizabeth Rose
                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        This is what my Adobe Illustrator art file looks like right now lol

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