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    • Coley
      Coley @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett great point. I'll go about adding a log pole support type thing.

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd last edited by

        My stab at the house part of exercise #4. Trees are a lot easier for me -I will take a stab at the iso diagram version for this. That was last on row 1.

        Exercise #4 House FINAL Light.jpg

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd last edited by

          Isometric House Exercise #4.jpg

          Not perfect but finished. Now I haven't been on week 2 -spoilers -now I can! πŸ™‚
          @Braden-Hallett Now I know some of my issues but feedback is good too. Had some issues with roof tiles specifically and it was far more challenging doing the isometric version - but was able to put How To Draw Everything course more into practise.

          Thanks and anybody else is always welcomed to comment.

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          • murielle
            murielle @Heather Boyd last edited by

            @Heather-Boyd Hey, I'm still going to give a little feedback.
            On the side view, it looks like the roof is passing the wall, while on the top view it looks like the roof stops where the wall starts. From this angle I was expecting the roof to cover a little of the window.

            Love your work by the way. I wished mine could look so clean.

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @murielle last edited by

              @murielle That's a good catch thanks, that's an easy fix.

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd last edited by

                I worked on Worksheets 1 and 2 again after I watched past 50 minutes on the Reference Video to create them from my head mostly with a bit of help from the shapes I found in my house. I started and finished these today.

                This time please let me know which ones don't really meet the 3rds and/or 5ths Rule - some are more natural and others I had to stop and see if they were working with the rule. @Braden-Hallett and everyone else πŸ™‚ always appreciative.

                CEDC Workbook 01-1.jpg

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  @Heather-Boyd I can't see a single one that looks boring or too symmetrical πŸ˜ƒ

                  Some of those tree shapes are super neat. I particularly like the three in the second row that are growing near/on cliff faces.

                  I think with the trees I may keep in mind balance. Throwing some small objects on the other end of the teeter totter to help balance out some of the big swooping flowing shapes.

                  Awesome work!

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett My mother agrees, we call that particular one the woman with swooping hair. I like my trees with personality and attitude. Now when you say small objects -do you mean as part of the tree -branches or other elements - which I tried to do with the cliff?

                    Thanks -my free choice are birds far more challenging for me.

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                      I mean tree elements πŸ™‚

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd said in Group run through creative environment design week 1 art and feedback:

                        Isometric House Exercise #4.jpg

                        Not perfect but finished. Now I haven't been on week 2 -spoilers -now I can! πŸ™‚
                        @Braden-Hallett Now I know some of my issues but feedback is good too. Had some issues with roof tiles specifically and it was far more challenging doing the isometric version - but was able to put How To Draw Everything course more into practise.

                        Thanks and anybody else is always welcomed to comment.

                        @Heather-Boyd I feel your pain. Roof tile drive me nuts :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

                        Nice work with the isometric perspective!

                        I think out of all your silhouettes, this is the one that I find just ever so slightly off balance. That's my one issue πŸ™‚

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by Heather Boyd

                          @Braden-Hallett Yes I tried to balance it better with chimney weight. Thanks for your thoughts.

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                          • Heather Boyd
                            Heather Boyd last edited by

                            Free choice - birds - a bit more tricky.

                            I think next week will be my week 2. This was a tough week my father started his depression and anxiety classes and his mother just passed early this morning, she was 92.

                            For all who celebrate Good Friday - reflection ❀

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                              @Heather-Boyd Tough week indeed 😞 You do what you need to do.

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                              • BichonBistro
                                BichonBistro last edited by

                                I am on week 1 and questioning exercise 1, silhouettes. I have watched vids intro thru POV so far.
                                When I did the first 3 silhouettes trying to use variants of 3 basic shapes, I notice I do not have a vision of a building in my head. I am just putting shapes down on paper. Since I am not thinking of a building image, there is no perspective or POV. I thought this was correct way to approach the exercise until Will said in the reference video that too often we make up things in our head instead of drawing from reference. Should I be using references for exercises 1-4 for week 1?
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                                • Heather Boyd
                                  Heather Boyd @BichonBistro last edited by

                                  @BichonBistro first time I went through I used reference and then the second time I watched and realised I wasn't suppose to, so I just scribbled some shapes -what felt awkward and natural. Don't be afraid.

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                                  • Nathalie Kranich
                                    Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                    Hey! I'm new to the forum and haven't found a chance to join the conversation yet, since time has been a bit tight. I was really inspired by all your work above though, some great exercises and even better results there! I'm not subscribed to the lessons, so I'm not sure if it's okay for me to work along from what I see you try, but seeing all those thumbnails I wanted to try some too. Haven't had the time to work on proper objective views, but I look forward to trying my hand at some more studies and thumbnails in future πŸ™‚

                                    treeSilhouettes.jpg HouseSilouettes.jpg
                                    ObjectiveViews.jpg

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                                    • Heather Boyd
                                      Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                      @Nathalie-Kranich These are faboulous! Thank you for joining in inspite of not taking the class, that's bold - and it doesn't bother me. I have a huge heart for your trees ❀ there is so much variety.

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                                      • BichonBistro
                                        BichonBistro @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                        @Heather-Boyd thanks Heather, ok I will try not to be afraid 😱 art is the only area of my life where I am truly a quitterβ€”usually i am like a dog with a bone when it comes to problem-solving (unless it’s a math problem πŸ˜‚) but my impulse with art is to throw up my hands, so I am going to go finish the first exercise right now!!! Thank you 😊

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                                          BichonBistro @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                          @Nathalie-wow, these are fantastic!

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                                            BichonBistro @Nathalie Kranich last edited by BichonBistro

                                            @Nathalie-Kranich @Heather-Boyd I am having a slow slog through exercise ONEβ€”I don’t have a clue how I would turn any of my silhouettes so far into drawings of buildings. I am just putting random shapes on paper and not seeing them turn into buildings in my head. They all seem to be turning into solid blobs with no interest or variation. Is it possible to describe your process or is it intuitive? 9C48B1D2-22DF-42C8-AFB1-3346A434973E.jpeg

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