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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Welp, the fact that I got aggravated completing this exercise tells me I need to do it more. A LOT more. πŸ™‚

      Something I noticed is that in these compositions it's not just the shapes that are balanced, but the lights and darks seem to be, too. It's something I wouldn't have thought about if I hadn't done this assignment πŸ˜ƒ

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett I feel like row 1 number 2 and 3 and row 2 number 3 -have really nice compositions as you have nicely valued them. Some of them definitely look tricky. I will find a variety.

        Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
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        Be blessed,

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett nailed it i think

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • demotlj
            demotlj SVS OG last edited by

            I didn’t have much time to work on this this week (Minister + Holy Week = no time for art... or breathing.)

            I had already done the first four last time I watched the course so I tried to do a little every day to finish up and deliberately used Good Notes instead of Procreate to really severely limit my tools so I’d keep it loose and quick. It was interesting comparing the β€œfine art” pieces I had done before to the more classic illustrators I did this time. This is really good practice.

            770A9DFA-2C30-4887-B57E-0361CAC20D6B.jpeg

            Laurie DeMott
            instagram.com/demotlj

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            • braden H
              braden H @demotlj last edited by

              @demotlj Great work! Yeah, this weekend must be crazy busy for you πŸ™‚

              That's a really good idea to use a program that limits the amount of detail and value your capable of using. I know that in procreate you can really zoom in, even with something thumbnail sized, so using goodnotes was just smart πŸ™‚

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              • murielle
                murielle @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                @ErinCortese These are absolutely stunning 😲

                http://artbymurielle.com
                https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                • braden H
                  braden H last edited by

                  Started a thread for week 3!

                  https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/7399/group-run-through-creative-environment-design-week-3-art-and-feedback

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    Once again, If anyone here wants more critiquey feedback on their work, post it and tag me with an @ and I'll give you a short critique.

                    If you want a critique but DON'T wanna post it here for whatever reason feel free to PM me on these forums or DM me on discord πŸ™‚

                    I don't feel AS comfortable critiquing these, but I'll do my best!

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                    • Erin.Cortese
                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @murielle last edited by

                      @murielle Thank you!

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd last edited by

                        Week 2 just finished up. Challenging, some were more helpful in visualising than others.

                        CEDC Workbook 01-6 FINAL part 1.jpg

                        CEDC Workbook 01-5 FINAL VLAUE part2.jpg

                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                        Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                        Be blessed,

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                        • Nathalie Kranich
                          Nathalie Kranich @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett You do so well on all these exercises __ amazing stuff.

                          www.nathaliekranich.com
                          https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                          https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                          • Nathalie Kranich
                            Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                            Very belated week 2 attempt πŸ™‚

                            valueStudies1 copy.jpg

                            www.nathaliekranich.com
                            https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                            https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                              @Nathalie-Kranich Nice work! Looks to me like you nailed it πŸ˜ƒ

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                              • Erin.Cortese
                                Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                @Nathalie-Kranich These are great, your values look spot on!

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                                • Heather Boyd
                                  Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                  @Nathalie-Kranich Pretty wow wow!

                                  Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                                  Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                  Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                  Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                  Be blessed,

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                                  • Nathalie Kranich
                                    Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                    @Heather-Boyd @Erin-Cortese @Braden-Hallett thank you guyys, I swear I spent four times as long trying to find images to copy than I did copying them. How was your process for that, and where did you lot look for masters to study? I just sort of went with 'stuff I like ' but I'm not sure if there's a better educated way of determining what is worth studying πŸ˜ƒ

                                    www.nathaliekranich.com
                                    https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                                    https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                                    • Erin.Cortese
                                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                      @Nathalie-Kranich I chose mine based on a variety of things, but they were all compositions that I either liked or had styles I want to experiment with in the future. Many, if not all of the compositions were ones that I already had saved on Instagram, or were taken directly from people I follow. I had so many saved to choose from that I narrowed it down based on wide format and different levels of detail.

                                      I learned a lot doing it this way - one of the more detailed ones I did, I absolutely hated doing. It came from an artist who does environments that I thought I would love doing, and now I know I have absolutely no desire to work in that style. I learned things like that from the other thumbnails too.

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                                      • Heather Boyd
                                        Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by Heather Boyd

                                        @Nathalie-Kranich

                                        Just my Pinterest boards. Then when I reviewed first collection -there was a colour scheme which was super cool (for myself to see that I naturally combine works by colours/complementary). So I based mine off of colour (unconsciously) and value to help me work through my struggle with that. Composition was sort of in the back of my mind. I work more on how a work makes me feel -atmosphere and mood and such.

                                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                                        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                        Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                        Be blessed,

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                          @Nathalie-Kranich I think we're all in the same boat for picking study material πŸ™‚

                                          After a certain point a tried to stop thinking about the images and just take the ones that caught my eye. Pinterest was awesome for source material.

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                                          • Nathalie Kranich
                                            Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                            Ha, that makes me feel better then, anything we like goes I guess! I browsed Artstation for mine.
                                            I also just noticed just how formulaic a lot of the images I picked out appear, in terms of placing a vertical object on the line to the right third, against a bright background, framed by a dark foreground. It applies to all of them, apart from the first, which is just the same formula flipped! I feel like @Heather-Boyd 's second set of choices also have a lot of similarities, with bright midgrounds being framed by quite dark foregrounds on both sides, like a cave.

                                            www.nathaliekranich.com
                                            https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                                            https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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