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    • Coley
      Coley @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett I listen to my inner jerk less and less as I get older 🙂 We do all have one, though, don't we?! Gotta ignore that jerk ha ha

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by

        Creative Environment designexercise6a1.jpg Creative Environment designexercise6a2.jpg
        I did two sketches, drawing on a tablet which I don't have a lot of practice with! Just trying to get used to working in photoshop a little and not get totally overwhelmed like I normally do lol.
        First house is based on hut from the film set for Random Passage, a wood hut with mossy/grassy roof. Second house is sort of greek themed.
        Will have to get on the other two exercises asap. Bit strapped for time this week with kids off from school for easter break.
        The exercises are teaching me a lot about using reference to influence my sketch and idea but not be married to it! I SO need to learn to do that. And last week's exercises on thumbnails was fantastic to get me started on that habit. Really learning some important ways to work here......pretty sure it will stay with me. Grateful for this group as well 🙂

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • Erin.Cortese
          Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

          The couches went easier, I feel much better about these. They are definitely less intimidating than buildings. What I do feel like I am missing here though is the stylization. @Braden-Hallett the stylization is something that you nailed! Yours look like they are ready to drop in a composition. Is that something that comes naturally for you, or did it come with practice? I wasn't even thinking about style or thirds and fifths while I was doing these, it wasn't until I was finished that I noticed the lack of style.

          exercise-6b.jpg

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

            @ErinCortese i want these couches in my living room.
            I also like to prove my inner jerk wrong

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • Erin.Cortese
              Erin.Cortese Moderator @Coley last edited by

              @Coley These look great! You managed to capture a lot of mood and tone with these.

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              • braden H
                braden H @Coley last edited by

                @Coley Do what you can when you can 🙂

                I'm learning a lot from this group run through as well 😃

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                  @ErinCortese said in Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback:

                  @Braden-Hallett the stylization is something that you nailed! Yours look like they are ready to drop in a composition. Is that something that comes naturally for you, or did it come with practice?

                  I think it mostly comes with practice. I've done a LOT of comic pages, so style's something that's crept in over time 🙂

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    The problem with procrastinating is that I look at what everyone else has done and am so blown away I'm reluctant to even try 🙂 (I will give it shot but you guys are really good. I love everyone's stuff.)

                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                      Done...uff...only raw sketch
                      CED_Workbook2-1487653085372-1a.jpg

                      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH @demotlj last edited by MichaelaH

                        @demotlj I know what You mean, but we shouldn't be discouraged...try your best, we all are learning and learning never stops, we can get only better.

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                          @MichaelaH horsey! Nice touch

                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • Coley
                            Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                            @ErinCortese fantastic couches!!

                            https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @MichaelaH last edited by

                              @MichaelaH sweet little barn and horses! I thought about doing a barn as well but haven't yet 😉

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

                                @MichaelaH i was struggling on what to do with that little cube attached to the house. I never would have thought of a stable! Nice work 🙂

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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                  You guys make such amazing work. I wish I was a part of this. 🙂

                                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                  • murielle
                                    murielle @Coley last edited by

                                    @Coley these are really good. I love that you added shading/texture.

                                    There is just one thing that isn't clear. On the second one with the stairs. Are these stairs 'floating' (or overlapping)? The wall of the house seems to go in underneath the stairs. If there is indeed a space I would either add some shading, or put an extra support beam underneath the steps.

                                    http://artbymurielle.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                                    • Erin.Cortese
                                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                      @nyrrylcadiz We are only on week two, and everyone is working at different paces. You should join!

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                        @nyrrylcadiz joooooooooin uuuuuuuuuuus 🙂

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H last edited by

                                          Okeedokee ladies and gents, I may not be as present in the forums the next 6 days or so since I'm going to a comicon and not bringing a computer.

                                          So next week's homework may be posted Monday night instead of Sunday night. But worry not! This group run through will keep going until we're all done.

                                          Mostly because I wanna do another one after this one 😃

                                          So many awesome houses and couches this week 🙂

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                                          • murielle
                                            murielle @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett Enjoy

                                            http://artbymurielle.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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