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    • Coley
      Coley @Buddy Skelton last edited by

      @Buddy-Skelton I don't mind , thanks so much! I am quite appreciative ๐Ÿ™‚ I started Mastering Perspective course but haven't gotten very far into it, it's on my list to get through! I did struggle with the back of the couch and the arms. I guesstimated the middle of the couch..........I should have known to use the x trick as I did do Will's perspective course. I need a lot more practice and help such as this. Thanks, it is a learning opportunity for me ๐Ÿ™‚

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • Coley
        Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey thanks! I think you are right on the roof and the ladder. I appreciate the comment ๐Ÿ™‚

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG last edited by demotlj

          My โ€œcouch.โ€ What I learned from this one is that I hate drawing furniture. My characters will have to sit on bean bag chairs.

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          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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          • Erin.Cortese
            Erin.Cortese Moderator @demotlj last edited by

            @demotlj Very cool design, and nice crosshatching!

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            • murielle
              murielle @Erin.Cortese last edited by

              @ErinCortese I have no words... okay maybe some... THIS IS SO COOL.

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              • murielle
                murielle @demotlj last edited by

                @demotlj said in Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback:

                I hate drawing furniture

                I'm so happy you said that. Everyone draws these amazing sofas, yours as well by the way, and my mind goes completely blank.

                I had this idea of drawing a comic where my character lives in this cute tiny house... While doing this exercise I realized that he can't own anything and will probably live on the floor. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                • Erin.Cortese
                  Erin.Cortese Moderator @murielle last edited by

                  @murielle Wow, thank you!

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                  • Susan Marks
                    Susan Marks @murielle last edited by

                    @murielle These have all been so inspiring here-and with yours I am now starting to see how they will help you and others make great environments. (It was a head-slapping "dah" kind of realization...)

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                      So I also drew a barn and silo as @Coley did (great minds think alike) but mine looked so similar that I decided to try a new one and did this space rocket launch pad. I donโ€™t know if it strains the definition of โ€œbuildingโ€ too far but it was something Iโ€™d never attempted before as is obvious from some obvious structural problems. Iโ€™ve added an overlay of the assignment so you can see that I did at least adhere to the lines.

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                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • murielle
                        murielle last edited by

                        I officially gave up on the sofa design. But I tried to put in some work on the other building. I'm just not feeling it.
                        With the houses, I still felt it was related to work I wanted to do, and I felt more motivated to give that a try.

                        I don't like this design and I can see so many mistakes (perspective and all), but it's all I got.

                        IMG_20190428_102117.jpg

                        http://artbymurielle.com
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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @murielle last edited by

                          @murielle did you use any references? Can you show them?

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                          • murielle
                            murielle @Heather Boyd last edited by

                            @Heather-Boyd Yes and no. I used the reference below, but it was only as inspiration. I wanted the 'open' areas to be windows. Like an office building.

                            Schermafbeelding 2019-04-28 om 18.07.56.png

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @demotlj last edited by

                              @demotlj I think it looks great! I'm no expert on perspective but it looks good to me. From dairy barn to rocket.... Maybe the first cow in outer space? ๐Ÿ˜‰seriously though, it looks structurally sound to me and a good image.

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • murielle
                                murielle last edited by

                                Hey everyone, I'm going to take a break from these exercises. I'm short on time, and since I'm really not happy with my results on this exercise I want to redo them. I had hoped to get a lot more out of this then I did.

                                I will pick up again when my crazy schedule dies down.

                                http://artbymurielle.com
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                                • JerrySketchyArt
                                  JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                                  Work got me a bit behind last week, but hopefully I can catch up. Here's my hut.

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                                  • JerrySketchyArt
                                    JerrySketchyArt @murielle last edited by

                                    @murielle Nothing wrong with a redo! Good luck on them. You can always join us in the Discord server if you want to talk more and get extra feedback.

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H last edited by

                                      Sorry I couldn't reply to anyone until now! The amount they charge for wifi at comic conventions is utterly criminal (200 bucks for 4 days) and my data plan suuuuuuuuuuucks.

                                      But now I'm caught up! So much awesome work ๐Ÿ™‚

                                      I'll be posting week 4 sometime tomorrow!

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H last edited by

                                        So many awesome designs!

                                        Week 4 work and such is up!

                                        https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/7428/group-run-through-creative-environment-design-week-4-art-and-feedback

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                                        • JerrySketchyArt
                                          JerrySketchyArt last edited by

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Coley last edited by

                                            @Coley Nice work! I particularly like the first couch. You got real ambitious with the silo on that barn ๐Ÿ™‚

                                            I'll do a draw-over of some thing later on today.

                                            Sorry it took me a little while to get back to you! I've been out of town/busy.

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