Making Narrative pieces- Tortoise and the Hare project

[ThisKateCreates]

This looks like a really fun project! Can't wait to see the pieces.

[jthomas]

I love these and the concept is pretty unique. At least to me. This looks like a wonderful project so far and I can see this as a nice book and comic novel to read.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@ThisKateCreates @jthomas Thank you! I’m currently working on the first spread. I’ll probably post it soon.

[jthomas]

@nyrrylcadiz Awesome. I'm gonna watch this thread to keep updated!

[Heather Boyd]

@nyrrylcadiz

I love the hare's space ship's ears! That's really cute. I hope you have a lot of fun -I think you will.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Hi, everyone! Here’s an update. I started this piece yesterday and am almost done. Any suggestions?

[jthomas]

@nyrrylcadiz WHOA! Absolutely stunning! I like the blur effect on the planet they or on but I feel it might be a little harsh. My only thoughts at the moment.

[StudioLooong]

this is such a fun project! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Heather-Boyd haha thanks! Hare’s ears are always up when his happy or agressive and I wanted to emphasize it in the illustrations. However, the glass cover on his ship prevented me from showing just that. So I decided to add ears to his space ship so that Hare’s ears won’t hit the glass whenever they perk up.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@jthomas thanks! Definitely noted.

@StudioLooong thank you!

[lenwen]

I feel you! I really love your designs and they look so much fun!
I also love your color scheme

[Johanna Kim]

Such good advice and I love your story twist idea!

[MichaelaH]

@nyrrylcadiz I like the characters and the flying stones (meteors) have more deep in values, than the characters, the hare the most, is missing some dark values.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Here’s an update! I feel that it’s done. Ok, I’m ready to move on to the next.

[animatosoor]

@nyrrylcadiz It made me happy to see this update! Great piece, and great idea overall. I can't wait to see more of your progress on this project.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@lenwen @Johanna-Kim @MichaelaH @animatosoor thank you!

[Coley]

@nyrrylcadiz cool, I missed this thread before now but I love love your artwork!

[braden H]

@nyrrylcadiz The rabbit very much reminds of me Zap Brannigan from Futurama so I think you nailed his attitude.

Best detail for me is the fact that the turtle is wearing his suit underneath his shell. Awesome design!

[Johanna Kim]

@nyrrylcadiz This turned out so awesome! Looking forward to seeing how this series progresses.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Braden-Hallett lol! Hahahahahahafhaahaahahahahhahha! it’s funny you mentioned that coz I always thought that hare looked like Fry! But yes his obnoxious confidence does remind me of Zap! I was even planning to do a Fry meme with Hare instead. Hehe