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    Making Narrative pieces- Tortoise and the Hare project

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    • Heather Boyd
      Heather Boyd @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

      @nyrrylcadiz

      I love the hare's space ship's ears! That's really cute. I hope you have a lot of fun -I think you will.

      🙂

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      Be blessed,

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

        Hi, everyone! Here’s an update. I started this piece yesterday and am almost done. Any suggestions?

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        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • jthomas
          jthomas @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @nyrrylcadiz WHOA! Absolutely stunning! I like the blur effect on the planet they or on but I feel it might be a little harsh. My only thoughts at the moment.

          To Thy Self be True

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          • StudioLooong
            StudioLooong last edited by

            this is such a fun project! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

            Taylor Woolley
            (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

              @Heather-Boyd haha thanks! 😊 Hare’s ears are always up when his happy or agressive and I wanted to emphasize it in the illustrations. However, the glass cover on his ship prevented me from showing just that. So I decided to add ears to his space ship so that Hare’s ears won’t hit the glass whenever they perk up.

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                @jthomas thanks! Definitely noted.

                @StudioLooong thank you!

                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • lenwen
                  lenwen last edited by

                  I feel you! I really love your designs and they look so much fun!
                  I also love your color scheme 🙂

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                  • Johanna Kim
                    Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

                    Such good advice and I love your story twist idea!

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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrrylcadiz I like the characters and the flying stones (meteors) have more deep in values, than the characters, the hare the most, is missing some dark values.

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                        Here’s an update! I feel that it’s done. Ok, I’m ready to move on to the next.

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                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                          @nyrrylcadiz It made me happy to see this update! Great piece, and great idea overall. I can't wait to see more of your progress on this project.

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                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                            @lenwen @Johanna-Kim @MichaelaH @animatosoor thank you!

                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                              @nyrrylcadiz cool, I missed this thread before now but I love love your artwork!

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                @nyrrylcadiz The rabbit very much reminds of me Zap Brannigan from Futurama 🙂 so I think you nailed his attitude.

                                Best detail for me is the fact that the turtle is wearing his suit underneath his shell. Awesome design!

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                                • Johanna Kim
                                  Johanna Kim SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                  @nyrrylcadiz This turned out so awesome! Looking forward to seeing how this series progresses.

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                    @Braden-Hallett lol! Hahahahahahafhaahaahahahahhahha! 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣 it’s funny you mentioned that coz I always thought that hare looked like Fry! But yes his obnoxious confidence does remind me of Zap! I was even planning to do a Fry meme with Hare instead. Hehe

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                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • Corlette Douglas
                                      Corlette Douglas last edited by

                                      I love the colors you used for the piece , my eyes instantly know where to look. It's adorable 🙂

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                                        JennyJones last edited by

                                        @nyrrylcadiz I (like @Braden-Hallett ) was going to say that my favorite thing was the turtle and how he looks like he had to put his shell on over his clothes. He’s such a round and super cute guy! I look forward to seeing more pieces from this project. It’s a fun concept.

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                                        • Jorge Valentin
                                          Jorge Valentin last edited by

                                          Woah awesome work! I really your design process on this. The characters are adorable, especially the tortoise, love how he turned out. I'm interested in seeing how you illustrate the rest.

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                                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                                            Here’s another update! I still have a lot to do but I just want to show you guys where I’m at. Any thoughts? I’d be happy to hear them. Thanks.

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                                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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