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    Making Narrative pieces- Tortoise and the Hare project

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

      @Heather-Boyd haha thanks! 😊 Hare’s ears are always up when his happy or agressive and I wanted to emphasize it in the illustrations. However, the glass cover on his ship prevented me from showing just that. So I decided to add ears to his space ship so that Hare’s ears won’t hit the glass whenever they perk up.

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

        @jthomas thanks! Definitely noted.

        @StudioLooong thank you!

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • lenwen
          lenwen last edited by

          I feel you! I really love your designs and they look so much fun!
          I also love your color scheme 🙂

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          • Johanna Kim
            Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

            Such good advice and I love your story twist idea!

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            • MichaelaH
              MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @nyrrylcadiz I like the characters and the flying stones (meteors) have more deep in values, than the characters, the hare the most, is missing some dark values.

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              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                Here’s an update! I feel that it’s done. Ok, I’m ready to move on to the next.

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                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • animatosoor
                  animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                  @nyrrylcadiz It made me happy to see this update! Great piece, and great idea overall. I can't wait to see more of your progress on this project.

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                    @lenwen @Johanna-Kim @MichaelaH @animatosoor thank you!

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • Coley
                      Coley @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrrylcadiz cool, I missed this thread before now but I love love your artwork!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                        @nyrrylcadiz The rabbit very much reminds of me Zap Brannigan from Futurama 🙂 so I think you nailed his attitude.

                        Best detail for me is the fact that the turtle is wearing his suit underneath his shell. Awesome design!

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                        • Johanna Kim
                          Johanna Kim SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                          @nyrrylcadiz This turned out so awesome! Looking forward to seeing how this series progresses.

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett lol! Hahahahahahafhaahaahahahahhahha! 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣 it’s funny you mentioned that coz I always thought that hare looked like Fry! But yes his obnoxious confidence does remind me of Zap! I was even planning to do a Fry meme with Hare instead. Hehe

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                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                            • Corlette Douglas
                              Corlette Douglas last edited by

                              I love the colors you used for the piece , my eyes instantly know where to look. It's adorable 🙂

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                                JennyJones last edited by

                                @nyrrylcadiz I (like @Braden-Hallett ) was going to say that my favorite thing was the turtle and how he looks like he had to put his shell on over his clothes. He’s such a round and super cute guy! I look forward to seeing more pieces from this project. It’s a fun concept.

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                                • Jorge Valentin
                                  Jorge Valentin last edited by

                                  Woah awesome work! I really your design process on this. The characters are adorable, especially the tortoise, love how he turned out. I'm interested in seeing how you illustrate the rest.

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                                    Here’s another update! I still have a lot to do but I just want to show you guys where I’m at. Any thoughts? I’d be happy to hear them. Thanks.

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                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                      @Coley @Corlette-Douglas @JennyJones @Jorge-Valentin thank you!

                                      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                      • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                        Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                        @nyrrylcadiz

                                        I think it looks great. I love narrative pieces and I think you have a great thing going here.
                                        Can I ask what you use to illustrate?
                                        I am a traditional artist using color pencil, watercolor and graphite at this point and painting in acrylic but I feel that it might be a good idea for me to start using a digital platform for my work.

                                        I love the concept of your current project and I think you have a strong sense of what you are communicating.
                                        I can imagine this being interesting to kids.

                                        Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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                                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                          @Jessica-Jolicoeur hi! I’m using Procreate on my ipad

                                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                          • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                            Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                            @nyrrylcadiz

                                            I have been doing research and I have heard about procreate quite a bit.
                                            I love traditional media so I am reluctant to get into a digital format but I also want to see what I could do with it.
                                            Thank you.

                                            Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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