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    "The Moment Before I Lost My Mom" Kids Book Project Progress for SCBIW Portfolio Preview. . .and eventually Self Publish by April 2020

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    • 2MK
      2MK last edited by

      Hey Elizabeth,

      I've seen many children's book covers where a child hugs a parent, so I suggest #6 as a safe bet.
      Also, do you think 'A Little Place to Remember' is a good title for the book?

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      • BichonBistro
        BichonBistro @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        @Squirrel-Size sorry you’ve been down with the flu πŸ˜•
        That hat with the hummingbird looks great!
        I can almost see your palette already ☺️
        You are doing a fabulous job.

        Hope the business trip doesn’t wear you out...

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          @MichaelaH Thanks πŸ™‚

          Thats a good point @2MK. I like that idea. And I love that title! I'll add it to my list πŸ™‚

          @BichonBistro Thanks, I'm feeling much better now. and yeah, I'm itching to color it!

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          • xin li
            xin li last edited by

            @Squirrel-Size really delicate drawings and wonderful story. I really love how you draw the garden and plantations.

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              UPDATE!
              Helloooooo Art Peeps,
              I'm back! My business trip was amazing! It was quite eventful and I learned a lot. Some sad news though, while up there in St. Louis, my truck broke down and it was a bit of an expensive fix. So I'm going back to full time at work again 😞

              But I guess that just means I'm gonna have to give up a few other things in order to finish this book at the dummy book deadline on Sep 1st.

              I don't know about you all, but I'm a very social person, and thats probably why I usually don't get much illustrations work done. I'm just gonna have to hang out with my Ipad during the weekends instead of my chums. My poor buddies are going to think I fell of the side of the earth. hahaha, Oh well. At least there is FaceTime to prove I'm still alive.
              But I'm determined to create this thing!

              Oh! also, I accidentally gave my number to a little 20-year old while in St. Louis, and now he wont stop texting me! ugh!

              My progress from over last week and this weekend.

              #6
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              #3
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              #2
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              #4
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              #7
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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                @Squirrel-Size lookin' good!

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  Yeah, going back to full time at work is making it super hard! I managed to finish drawing spread #2, but I just barely touched my two spreads from last week. It didn't help that I had several pre engagements this weekend. But the good news! This next weekend is empty! Which means I'm going to be sitting on my butt drawing all weekend to catch up! Only two weeks left before my drawing deadline! And four weeks to have my dummy-book printed out and done. This week, I'm going to start on the cover. I'll be posting more thumbnails on that later this week.

                  My goals for the next several weeks:

                  Aug18-24: finish spreads #4 & #7, Cover thumbnails and start cover

                  Aug 25-31: Final drawing edits and final details added to spreads, Finish cover, drawing and color.

                  Sept 1-7: Formate book, Print

                  Sept 8 - 13 Bind book

                  Due Date for the Open Portfolio Preview at Mid central SCBWI Conference Sept 14th

                  After the SCBWI conference, I'm going to take a little break, then start the process to finishing the book and have it out my late March 2020

                  #2
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                  #4
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                  #7
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                  • BichonBistro
                    BichonBistro @Elizabeth Rose last edited by BichonBistro

                    @Squirrel-Size best wishes in meeting your goals!

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose @BichonBistro last edited by

                      @BichonBistro Thanks! I appreciate it πŸ™‚

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                      • Whitney Simms
                        Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

                        I love this so much! The artwork is wonderful and this story is just a pure piece of you and your mom! Amazing! Can't want to see layout #2 painted. Love the use of depth of field. You really move through the image.

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose @Whitney Simms last edited by

                          Awe! Thanks @Whitney-Simms Thats so sweet πŸ™‚ I'm just itching to start coloring it!

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG last edited by

                            I was thinking, this would be a sweet book to sell at a flowershop for the bereaved who have lost their mothers and especially for kids who lose their mothers. It could be so comforting for a child. Even if they don't plant gardens there might be something else that would bring them peace that connected them with their mother. Cooking, reading together, etc. I love this~!

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • Elizabeth Rose
                              Elizabeth Rose @MOO last edited by

                              @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen awe! That is a great idea! I love it!

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                              • Elizabeth Rose
                                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                Okay Art Peeps! Vote which book cover sketch do you Like! I think my fav right now is #3

                                #1
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                                #2
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                                #3
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                                • Kasey Snow
                                  Kasey Snow last edited by Kasey Snow

                                  I also like number three!

                                  This will be a lovely (and hopefully very healing) book when you are done with it. πŸ™‚

                                  Your garden pictures make me wonder if you have ever read The Secret Garden. If you haven't, I'd highly suggest it. It's a lovely book about healing and love, at its core. And my mental images of the garden in the book looked a lot like your real life garden that you made. I think you'd really understand the protagonist in a way that those of us who've never built a garden can't.

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                                  ~Kasey

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                                  • BichonBistro
                                    BichonBistro @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                    @Squirrel-Size I love #3 tooβ€”in addition to the feeling of tender closeness, it communicates that her mom will always be supporting her, has her back so to speak, and is almost like her shadow (in the good sense of the word)

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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                      @Squirrel-Size I like number 2 best in these sketches. the characters are right in the center of the page but the foliage on the sides is higher on one side than the other so it seems to balance out somehow. At least for me! Sweet!

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                                      • Elizabeth Rose
                                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                        @Kasey-Snow Thanks, yeah! I've both read and watch the Secret Garden. I love that story! I think it could have for sure been some of the inspiration for the building of my little flower garden. Tasha Tudor was also another big inspiration for my garden building as well.

                                        @BichonBistro Yeah! Thats exactly what I was going for in #3! I was wanting mama squirrel to look a shadow or an angel of sorts. I think it could really portray that when it gets colored. πŸ™‚

                                        @coley yeah, I think #2 is for sure one of my top favs! Its hard to pick! Thanks for your input! πŸ˜‰

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                                        • Su
                                          Su last edited by

                                          Absolutely stunning book. All your illustrations are so moving... can't wait to see the final product. Regarding the cover page, 2 and 3 are my favorites. I love them equally. Perhaps you can choose your favorite for the cover and use the other as a vignette to close the book.

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                                          • Elizabeth Rose
                                            Elizabeth Rose @Su last edited by

                                            @Su Awe! Thanks! Thats a great idea, I might just do that πŸ™‚

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