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    Does this horse read as a horse?

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    • braden H
      braden H @Coley last edited by

      @Coley Good to know 😃 'Reads as horse right away' is definitely what I'm goin' for!

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      • braden H
        braden H @Aaron_T last edited by

        @Aaron_T Chuck Jones drew best horses :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: It's amazing how far you can stretch the boundaries of a shape and still have it read

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        • TwiggyT
          TwiggyT last edited by

          @Aaron_T Ohmigosh, I love that horse. That's one of those images that sticks with you, lol.

          @Braden-Hallett Your drawing definitely looks like a horse! I think the head is a bit big, but otherwise it looks really good.

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          • braden H
            braden H @TwiggyT last edited by

            @TwiggyT Thanks 😃 I think I can live with the head being a bit too big (it does look a bit pony-ish)

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG last edited by

              Yes, it reads as a horse 🙂 I like it. It may be a little small and the head might eb a little big but, it doesn't really bother me.

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • Ailantan
                Ailantan last edited by

                I think it looks like a horse but with what is called an ambling gait. It looks very refined.

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                • KajsaH
                  KajsaH last edited by

                  I love this horse! It def reads immediately 🙂 I've been riding my whole life, and sure, there are parts of the anatomy that are exaggerated but it's stylistic right, not realistic 😉 I like it! Though as @Coley mentioned, the knight is sitting a bit too far back. He's in for a bumpy ride back there 😃 His heels are on point though!
                  Great work!

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                  • evilrobot
                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    No it reads as a broom 😄

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                    • ?
                      A Former User last edited by A Former User

                      Your horse is amazing, you horse-drawing wizard you! I find horses the hardest thing to draw and make a character out of, but yours is fab! I don't think it needs to be 100% exact, as I like his nose and he has so much attitude in his body language 🙂 Maybe he should be slightly bigger, but that's all I think you need to change in my opinion 🙂

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Ailantan last edited by

                        @Ailantan I was googling for so long looking for the right term for the gait I was going for. I'm gonna have to remember that!

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @evilrobot last edited by

                          @evilrobot FINALLY someone's looking at the right horse :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: though I think @bichonbistro did, too.

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I may fiddle with the head. Thanks 😃

                          @KajsaH said in Does this horse read as a horse?:

                          the knight is sitting a bit too far back

                          In my mind, he's very bad at his job 🙂 I think next time I have to draw a person riding a horse I may go take some riding lessons (fun AND informative!)

                          @hannahmccaffery I've always HAAATED drawing horses. They're so friggin' hard to draw. Attitude is good, though 🙂

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                          • Coley
                            Coley @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett actually your horsie is doing a very good walk! After that is trot, canter, then gallop .....all different gaits! You did an awesome job. Sorry all us horsie people are getting all horsie on you LoL!🤣

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                            • BichonBistro
                              BichonBistro @Coley last edited by

                              @Coley Better Horse-ie than Horse-*it

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