October WIP help requested...
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@chrisaakins Ha ha! Love that its name is "Fluffy"
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@chrisaakins I like the Fluffy as well.
But you might want to move it to the right a bit. I first read it as something attached to Fluffy's knee?
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So I think I am done. I used ball point pen and then edited it a little. I really like how it turned out. If you see any major glaring things let me know. If not I think I will submit it tomorrow.
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@chrisaakins The tag looks better. The ballpoint gives it a very nice texture.
I really like the Fluffy breaking the frame it makes the dog seem really big. I wonder if you had the smoke NOT break the frame if it would look even better. You could try it digitally pretty easy.
Nicely done.
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@chrisaakins I love the expression on the girls face! She seems so happy. Love the snot drip LOL
I agree with @theprairiefox with the smoke, or break it even more. It almost creates a tangent on the left. The other thing you can try is to darken the background a little more, your characters would pop even more. Great work!
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Thanks @Chip-Valecek and @theprairiefox I took your advice and touched it up a little bit with PS to fix the compositional problems. I am gogin to go ahead and post it. Not sure if it is sweet 16 quality but it is by far one of my better works to date.
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@J-L-Martin Thanks. I really love breaking the frame.
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@chrisaakins I like the changes... well done.
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@chrisaakins Nice work. I love seeing the transformation from rough to finished.
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@chrisaakins I also like the snot
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@chrisaakins this looks awesome!
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This is really amazing!!!the little girl is so cute and happy and the dog so beat up lol. Really love the breaking the frame thing. Wonderful job!
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@chrisaakins the textures and shading you've created with the ball point pen are great. How big is the original?
Nicola Schofield
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@neschof Thank you so much! 8x10
