December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

[deborah Haagenson]

@Braden-Hallett I like the move of the light bulb! I'm wondering if you need her large right hand. Couldn't it be under the covers? Maybe There is a good reason to have it there and I'm just missing it.

[braden H]

@deborah-Haagenson She's holding her hand up to her ear to better hear the murderous mice

[deborah Haagenson]

@Braden-Hallett Oh, I like that. I would absolutely leave her hand there, now that I see that!!

[NicolaSchofield]

@Braden-Hallett I can't help but imagine that she is the farmer's wife (with her carving knife) and that this plan by the mice is fated to go disastrously wrong giving us the origin story of the three blind mice

[cortney mahone]

@Braden-Hallett this is so cool, I love the description In the upper right image lol, can’t wait to see it finished

[braden H]

Sketch! Down to the wire. Got a day and a half. But at least the hard parts are all figured out

[braden H]

Lines!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Braden-Hallett oh no! I thought you were already done. Go Braden!

[Coley]

knocking it out of the park AGAIN Mr. @Braden-Hallett !!! so fun. in a very evil sort of way ha ha!!!

[braden H]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

oh no! I thought you were already done.

Oh goodness no Why take your time and not be stressed when you can wait until the very last two days?

@Coley said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

knocking it out of the park AGAIN

Thanks

[braden H]

Everything's laid in. Time for some adjustment layers and the inclusion of hatching and other nice mark making

[Gustavo Ruiz]

@Braden-Hallett this made me chuckle! Very nice concept and execution!

[Oriana Fernandez]

@Braden-Hallett this so reminds me of the Tom and Jerry cartoon, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Mouse (1947), only in this case, the mice are in charge of the poisonous concoction, and not the cat! Hehe! I like how you've handled the two planes, above and below, and even the contrast between the two. As always, your character expressions are priceless! Great composition!

[braden H]

@Oriana-Fernandez @Gustavo-Ruiz Thanks guys I've gotta track down that Tom and Jerry cartoon!

[braden H]

Gonna put it away until tonight and then maybe make a few small tweaks. It's at the point where adding too much will ruin it. But I'm liking it as it is

[demotlj]

@Braden-Hallett Great as always. I particularly like the repetition of the rats' color in the person's face. It helps tie the two halves together. I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

[braden H]

Thanks for the feedback everyone

[braden H]

@demotlj said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

It's still a roll of the dice or the flip of a coin whether my colours will work out or not. I need better odds than that