December WIP - feedback really appreciated

[LauraA]

I only just saw this, but really like the take on the prompt and agree that the vertical version is the way to go. Good luck with the finish!

[idid]

@xin-li Lovely concept! 1 works better. however, you may want to consider make the comp a little bit more dynamical. Right now this image has a tendency of being symmetric (a big trangle, with things distributed almost equally on its left and right) and thus being stable instead of dynamical. Change the position of the boy and objects in front of him should help. Shifting the position of moon a little bit may help, too, from my perspective.

[xin li]

@peteolczyk and @LauraA, thank you for the feedback.
@idid Definitely good point, I will see what I can do.

Really not sure if I will make it on time this month. But I have a lot of fun coming up with ideas for this prompt. If I run out of time, I will paint it in Jan :-).

[IanS]

Comp 1 for me. It's looking great!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Definitely 1. The moons is just well framed in that one.