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    January Contest WIP critique the heck out of it please

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    • Coley
      Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @Aleksey this looks fantastic. Re the tip of the tail, it might feel a little close, maybe have it tilted more away and/or smaller?
      I think this is going to be great!

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

        @Coley ok cool thank you thank you

        Everyones been super helpful im very excited about this piece

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey last edited by

          Line work so far. I’m going to try and add texture using color and light rather than line
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          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • KaraDaniel
            KaraDaniel last edited by

            Love it! Can't wait to see it in color!

            instagram.com/sha_kara
            karadaniel.net

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey @KaraDaniel last edited by

              @KaraDaniel thanks! colors gonna be a struggle but I think my method of stealing color palettes has been successful so far.

              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey last edited by

                Ok after great turmoil i think I finally found local colors that i like.23A12370-D96B-40C5-A161-D55C0B12C66B.jpeg

                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                alekseyillustration.com

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                • aska
                  aska @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  @Aleksey love the composition and colors!

                  Aska
                  www.mugaska.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
                  https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/mugaska

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey This is looking so good!

                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                    • Coley
                      Coley last edited by

                      Looking so awesome. Love the colors and the shapes/composition.
                      How does one go about stealing color palettes? Eyedropper tool?

                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

                        Thanks y’all
                        @Coley and ya import a picture into the app you’re using then eye dropper tool
                        I did tweak it some to my liking

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • Coley
                          Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                          @Aleksey very cool. Great way to learn. Maybe I'll steal from you 😅

                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @Coley last edited by

                            @Coley do it

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              Also i saw John Hendrix’s piece at the Society of Illustrators 62nd annual exhibition and i liked how he did the snow Bear footprints in his piece so i tried to copy the technique he used for my lizard creature.
                              I think im done, any final thoughts?
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                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • demotlj
                                demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                My final thoughts are that this turned out fabulously. I love the “camera placement,” the line work, and the night time palette you chose. It’s great.

                                Laurie DeMott
                                instagram.com/demotlj

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