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    • Lobalyss
      Lobalyss last edited by

      Your illustration is so lovely and cute, I love it 💞

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      • Coley
        Coley @BichonBistro last edited by

        @BichonBistro lol!

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by

          thanks @KaraDaniel and @Lobalyss 🙂

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          • Annaaronson
            Annaaronson last edited by

            This is so sweet. I love the work you put into it. I agree that it’s prefect for Valentines Day! Well done!

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            • deborah Haagenson
              deborah Haagenson last edited by

              Very nice! I'm just not sure if you need the little white icesicles hanging down from the branches. I think they might be a little distracting.

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              • Coley
                Coley @deborah Haagenson last edited by

                @deborah-Haagenson I was wondering that too. Gonna toy with removing them. Thanks ☺️

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                • Rachel Horne
                  Rachel Horne @Coley last edited by

                  @Coley this is super lovely!! I prefer the second image, I don’t think you need the branches at the top. ♥️

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                  • Coley
                    Coley @Rachel Horne last edited by

                    @Rachel-Horne thanks so much 🙂 I'm playing around with keeping some of them or removing them etc etc lol. I appreciate the feedback thank you 🙂 !

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • Coley
                      Coley last edited by

                      Some changes. Things are warmed up and flowers mostly removed and little twiggy alder sort of things poking through snow added. Background trees lowered. Realizing I need soft shadow under the characters. Going back and forth on branches or no branches! I like the depth they add but they're maybe a bit too angular? If anyone has thoughts on that let me know. And text or no text?
                      The one with branches doesn't have some of the changes yet eg warming up of colors etc
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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        I like it but i dont know how i feel about a big sign with an arrow that says “love” i think it would be more impactful as an illustration if it was telling me the same message without a sign.

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                        • BichonBistro
                          BichonBistro @Coley last edited by BichonBistro

                          @Coley I have favored the branches for framing Will and the girl, but when I add the text to the tree, that is no longer as much a factor, so maybe go without the branches?662DD420-29D7-46E0-AB2B-B67AE498C2A4.jpeg

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