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    • jbleau
      jbleau last edited by

      This is a really fun image! I want to know what happened! Since you asked for feedback I thought I would experiment, I hope you don’t mind. I thought I would see if I could bring more attention to the character in the globe(I missed her at first glance) ...made globe brighter with contrast/ boy darker/ cropped the image/ warm tone on boys face/ subtle back lighting on boy/ eye deform in glass...😁...just a little different treatment...this may be left field from your intent but thanks for posting...![alt text](B8739205-BE50-46EF-9572-F2CEDAEE79DA.jpeg image url)

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      • romy
        romy last edited by

        @StudioLooong Really nice image! I especially like the scene in the snowglobe, so much so that I would probably crop it to have a nice single focus on it, like so. 🙂

        cropped_s.jpg

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        • StudioLooong
          StudioLooong @jbleau last edited by

          @jbleau wow, this crop is so much better and I like the other suggestions as well, I'll try tp work some of it in as I keep going. I am afraid of it getting a little too dark overall but I like how the snow globe becomes the focus here.

          Taylor Woolley
          (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


          Website: www.woolleystories.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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          • StudioLooong
            StudioLooong @xin li last edited by

            @xin-li yes! perfect!

            Taylor Woolley
            (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


            Website: www.woolleystories.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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            • jbleau
              jbleau @StudioLooong last edited by

              @StudioLooong Glad to offer suggestions! Hope they help explore options😁

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              • Coley
                Coley last edited by

                This is super cute!!!

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • StudioLooong
                  StudioLooong last edited by

                  Still working on a few things but I thought I’d post an update. Here’s where I’m at with the snowglobe scene, I think the story is coming through a little better now, just need to fine-tune some of the colors and rendering.

                  A8E481A2-ACD7-4425-8417-14D18B5CFAAF.jpeg

                  Taylor Woolley
                  (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


                  Website: www.woolleystories.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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                  • jbleau
                    jbleau @StudioLooong last edited by

                    @StudioLooong looking good!

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                    • Rachel Horne
                      Rachel Horne @StudioLooong last edited by

                      @StudioLooong I really love the colour palette, the image is intriguing...

                      www.rachel-horne.com
                      instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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                      • Coley
                        Coley last edited by

                        LOVE! Such a fun image

                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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