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    • phoenix yip
      phoenix yip last edited by

      71836DEC-3B33-48E9-AB62-78DC61C5411C.jpeg I redid my whole piece, any comments or critics? Thank you!

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      • APHOTICMOTH
        APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

        I love it.

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        • phoenix yip
          phoenix yip @APHOTICMOTH last edited by

          @CLCanadyArts thank you!

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          • romy
            romy last edited by

            Love it too! Nitpicking: I feel like the spaceship is rendered in a different style than the environment and the foreground trees are very don't have as much detail / definition, although they're much closer. I get that the foreground trees are out of focus, but it looks a little too airbrushy for my taste, whereas I like how the plates on the ship are done. The more I look at it, the more discrepancies I notice in rendering / styles between the airbrushy values on the trees, the cartooney snow with the strong highlights, the painterly spaceship and flat background trees. But I like the comp and lighting. Does that help?

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            • Jenna Jenks
              Jenna Jenks @phoenix yip last edited by

              @phoenix-yip I love the lighting and atmosphere ❤️

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              • phoenix yip
                phoenix yip @romy last edited by

                @Finn Yes! thank you a lot! I did realize that on the ship, so I was redoing that, I really agree.

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                • phoenix yip
                  phoenix yip @Jenna Jenks last edited by

                  @Jenna-Jenks Thanks!

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