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problem with lamp etc in final assignment Basic Perspective class

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  • Coley
    Coley last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 11:56

    I'm trying to take my basic perspective class final assignment a little further and round it out a little more and turn it into a more finished bedroom study. I'm trying to add a lamp on the bedside table. Also not sure on the perspective on the clock above the bed (it sticks out a little from the wall so the line looks a little thick on the right hand side). . I used one of the grids that came with the Building Backgrounds class with Brian Ahjar to build this particular scene (I did a few more with my own grids but this was a higher point of view and I wanted to challenge myself a little more).
    Any thoughts on anything, in particular the lamp>!? 🙂
    basicperspectivefinal1.jpg

    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

    burvantill 1 Reply Last reply 29 Jan 2020, 14:21 Reply Quote 0
    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator @Coley last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 14:21

      @Coley For the lamp, we would see more of the top of the lamp. The circle would be fatter. I tried to do a draw over on my phone app but my fat fingers wouldn’t let me draw detail in such a small space 😂
      Try drawing a perspective box and fit the circle s into it. That should help you see.

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
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      Coley 1 Reply Last reply 29 Jan 2020, 14:25 Reply Quote 1
      • Coley
        Coley @burvantill last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 14:25

        @burvantill thanks! I'm giving that a try right now. Starting on building a box on the dresser based on the grid and will work within that. 😁

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by Coley 29 Jan 2020, 14:50 29 Jan 2020, 14:49

          basicperspectivefinal2ab.jpg

          working on making a box to build my lamp off of. I can see now that the ellipse on top will be wider for sure 🙂 Thinking on making it a square lampshade lol but I need the ellipse practice 😣

          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

          NessIllustration burvantill 2 Replies Last reply 29 Jan 2020, 17:32 Reply Quote 3
          • NessIllustration
            NessIllustration Pro @Coley last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 15:57

            @Coley Ellipses are difficult! It's great that you built the rectangle around the lamp to help you, that's a great tool to use to make sure your ellipses turn out as you want 🙂 As for the clock, the problem is that we can see the thickness of it both above and under it. This perspective is from a high POV, so we shouldn't be able to see the bottom. I hop that helps!

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            BichonBistro Coley 2 Replies Last reply 29 Jan 2020, 17:25 Reply Quote 3
            • BichonBistro
              BichonBistro @NessIllustration last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 16:53

              @NessIllustration your comments are always SO helpful! While I am still on 1-point perspective, I am following these perspective threads in hopes that lessons from those like you who do perspective well will percolate and eventually seep into my perspective-challenged brain. Thank you!

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              • Coley
                Coley @NessIllustration last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 17:25

                @NessIllustration thanks for the aha moment!

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator @Coley last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 17:32

                  @Coley just saw this, the bottom of the wall behind the lamp stand is on a different line than it is to the left of the bed. 😜
                  The small things sneak by. 🙂

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

                  Coley BichonBistro 2 Replies Last reply 29 Jan 2020, 19:14 Reply Quote 1
                  • Coley
                    Coley @burvantill last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 18:18

                    @burvantill oooh thanks will fix. 🙂

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • BichonBistro
                      BichonBistro @burvantill last edited by 29 Jan 2020, 19:14

                      @burvantill great catch!

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