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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @smceccarelli last edited by

      @smceccarelli cool thanks! That’s very helpful i was thinking about the silhouette too. I think i need to reposition the arm to make it work better. Im gonna try to change the perspective entirely too i didnt do the smart thing and make a perspective grid before i started the sketch

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • burvantill
        burvantill Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey I love the character. I think you should give him a bigger dynamic pose. He seems a formidable character but looks a bit stiff. Maybe widen his stance, 🤔 try a gesture sketch to see what works.

        Lisa Burvant
        www.lisaburvant.com
        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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        • KaraDaniel
          KaraDaniel last edited by

          Very cool! He does look a little off balance like he may fall backwards. But other than that looks great so far

          instagram.com/sha_kara
          karadaniel.net

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Ok cool thanks everyone!

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • Laurasketches
              Laurasketches last edited by

              I hate it when I arrive so late to the party....I also want a more dynamic pose and a story surrounding this character.....

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey @Laurasketches last edited by

                @Laurasketches haha yes i have a story for this character but a dynamic pose must come first!

                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                alekseyillustration.com

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                  Ok i think this is a bit more open. So im gonna tighten it up and fix the pose a bit more but i think the center of gravity and the silhouette id much better
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                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    Ok I finally done with the sketch whew. Now im gonna work on the composition of the whole image
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                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      Im now seeing a few problems im gonna go back and fix those up before i get into the composition

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey yes!!!

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                          Ok there i am happy with this sketch, moving on!
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                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey last edited by

                            Heres my concept, gonna play around with the silhouette because it looks kinda out of place but this is my general idea
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                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @Aleksey i might do a like, a wing in the night sky silhouette too

                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • KaraDaniel
                                KaraDaniel @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @Aleksey really cool! Looking great

                                instagram.com/sha_kara
                                karadaniel.net

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  Ok i think i figured out my composition more or less. Any feedback? I think the background will have some warm daytime colors but im going to keep them to a minimum.

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                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

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                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • chrisaakins
                                      chrisaakins @ArtofAleksey last edited by chrisaakins

                                      @Aleksey I like the linework. What story are you trying to tell? Is he creating the night? Why?

                                      Chris Akins
                                      www.chrisakinsart.com
                                      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

                                        @chrisaakins yup hes creating night. He is night birb.

                                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                        alekseyillustration.com

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                                        • TessaW
                                          TessaW last edited by

                                          Wow, it was quite a surprise to see the scene suddenly appear. I love where this is going.

                                          Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                                          Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                                          • ArtofAleksey
                                            ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                            Ok im sorry it took so long to block out the sun, but here is me playing around with The local color. Im keeping the composition simple to focus on the night birb. Would really love critiques here im struggling with the colors. Please and thank you 🙏
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                                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                            alekseyillustration.com

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