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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @Laurasketches last edited by

      @Laurasketches haha yes i have a story for this character but a dynamic pose must come first!

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

        Ok i think this is a bit more open. So im gonna tighten it up and fix the pose a bit more but i think the center of gravity and the silhouette id much better
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        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey last edited by

          Ok I finally done with the sketch whew. Now im gonna work on the composition of the whole image
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          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Im now seeing a few problems im gonna go back and fix those up before i get into the composition

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • burvantill
              burvantill Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @Aleksey yes!!!

              Lisa Burvant
              www.lisaburvant.com
              Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                Ok there i am happy with this sketch, moving on!
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                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                alekseyillustration.com

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  Heres my concept, gonna play around with the silhouette because it looks kinda out of place but this is my general idea
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                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey i might do a like, a wing in the night sky silhouette too

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • KaraDaniel
                      KaraDaniel @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      @Aleksey really cool! Looking great

                      instagram.com/sha_kara
                      karadaniel.net

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        Ok i think i figured out my composition more or less. Any feedback? I think the background will have some warm daytime colors but im going to keep them to a minimum.

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                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey last edited by

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                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • chrisaakins
                            chrisaakins @ArtofAleksey last edited by chrisaakins

                            @Aleksey I like the linework. What story are you trying to tell? Is he creating the night? Why?

                            Chris Akins
                            www.chrisakinsart.com
                            www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @chrisaakins last edited by

                              @chrisaakins yup hes creating night. He is night birb.

                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • TessaW
                                TessaW last edited by

                                Wow, it was quite a surprise to see the scene suddenly appear. I love where this is going.

                                Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                                Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                  Ok im sorry it took so long to block out the sun, but here is me playing around with The local color. Im keeping the composition simple to focus on the night birb. Would really love critiques here im struggling with the colors. Please and thank you 🙏
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                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

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                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                      Lisa Pickard last edited by

                                      Looking great. Personally I think after you've spent all that time creating a great character it would be a shame to loose it in all that background - need some air around it so it stands out. I like the one you started with yesterday with just the shape filled with the starlit sky.

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @Lisa Pickard last edited by

                                        @Lisa-Pickard so you think no background just the character and the shape are strong enough?

                                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                        alekseyillustration.com

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                                          Lisa Pickard @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                          @Aleksey I think too much background is a bit distracting - your eyes wouldn't know where to look. There are a lot of elements to your character and by making it a lot smaller you might loose all the detail? Maybe just a subtle/knocked back background would work ok - I liked it within the shape of the swirly design.

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                                          • Heather Boyd
                                            Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

                                            I’d say the same. Unless your story needs the background or you thought about the background ongoing as you made the character, or if the character interacted more with the background or additional characters include it. But the character with your props and the addition of the sky stars coming out of the prop is enough on its own.
                                            Right now the golden sun being warm is stealing us away from your bird character.

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