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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @carlianne last edited by

      @carlianne thanks i agree with you

      And yes of course feedback is welcome.

      Im already at the color study stage and it’s really fun

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey last edited by

        More color Study options
        Although these came out kinda dark

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          Lorna H last edited by

          I really love the concept of this, really funny, but also your characters are fantastic. I love the cat’s nonchalant appearance in contrast to the girls outrage 😂I tended to prefer the blue backgrounds as seems to help the girl to stand out. Amazing work!

          Lorna

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Ok my last color study

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            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

              Ok ive narrowed it down to these 3
              The second 2 her face looks a little too pink im gonna mess with that a tiny bit but everything else i like
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              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • Coley
                Coley last edited by

                Loving the colour studies !

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • marine
                  marine last edited by

                  @ArtofAleksey your concept and process is so great to watch, I'm learning a lot! (never done colour studies...)

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey @marine last edited by

                    @marine oh awesome im glad that you’re learning from it. I’m actually learning as i go with this one too.

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • StudioLooong
                      StudioLooong last edited by

                      These are looking fantastic, I love your concept and that kitchen design is stellar, personally I'm drawn to the top color study but it may be because the other two don't have much color contrast? (I know these are just color studies and not value studies, just something to keep in mind)

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                      Taylor Woolley
                      (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @StudioLooong last edited by

                        @StudioLooong great point thanks!

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by Heather Boyd

                          @ArtofAleksey I find of these the first brown/red really helps pop your characters but find the last lighter blue one softer or easier to look at for my eyes (though the dog gets lost with a blue head). And from the 3 you've chosen the first and I agree with the mention of the value study. I have been doing value studies first then trying my colour studies.

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                          • JoshSchouwstra
                            JoshSchouwstra last edited by

                            Cool concept! I like how well you designed the kitchen; keeping the focus on the characters, while making it look like most of the kitchen's I've been in: busy 🙂

                            I noticed that the box for the Catbot just has the tagline for the product on it, and with most products having the product name in a prominent place on the packaging, maybe it would be good to add a name on there (Whiskers 3000, Catinator 251…etc) either above the tagline or in place of it. I mean, the image reads well enough that I could tell that the Catbot is supposed to get rid of the mice, so the tagline could even go away all together if you wanted.

                            Looking forward to seeing where you go with the final colour!

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @JoshSchouwstra last edited by ArtofAleksey

                              @JoshSchouwstra yeah I thought about that. But the cartoonist in me couldn’t resist. I’ll try it though because maybe it will be better than a tag line. I can practice my typography a bit

                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • xin li
                                xin li last edited by

                                @ArtofAleksey great concept. Love seeing your progress.
                                I echo @StudioLooong regarding value. I think value is especially important with busy scene such as the one you are designing. Keep in mind a simple quesiton may help "is it a dark shape on a light background, or light shape on a dark background?" I would group all background in the same value zone, and simplify the rendering if I can. You could try to use more or less line work for the bakcground, and have a bit more rendering and details going on for the forground characters.

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey @xin li last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                  @xin-li yeah that’s what i was thinking gonna try and see if I can make that happen, thank you.

                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                    Ok im taking a little break now. Im having trouble tying the background with the foreground and I think that’s because none of the background colors are in the foreground and vise versa. I gotta figure that out, or repaint the background? I gotta push the values a bit more too they are too close.
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                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • ArtofAleksey
                                      ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

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                                      • Annaaronson
                                        Annaaronson last edited by

                                        @ArtofAleksey I like that you lightened the background, I agree that the values were too close in the previous one. I think because of the line work and how you laid things out even though the girls face and the background are similar colors she is still easy to read- but you could push her face a little further darker or lighter to maker her pop even more. This is hilarious- I love the work you have done on it and seeing your process.

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                                        • ArtofAleksey
                                          ArtofAleksey @Annaaronson last edited by

                                          @Annaaronson thanks Anna. Yeah the face was a concern but she does still pop. Maybe ill tweek it a tad more

                                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                          alekseyillustration.com

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                                          • kittytreets
                                            kittytreets last edited by

                                            That's so cute, I know it's going to turn out awesome.

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