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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG last edited by

      I love both 2 and 3!

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      • Neha Rawat
        Neha Rawat last edited by

        @Gary-Wilkinson Oh man! Right in the feels! All of them!

        2 and 3 resonated the most with me. I think 2 will look brilliant with the colors and lighting you have going on.

        Really looking forward to see how you take them forward!

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by

          I liked 1 and 2 best, 2 is the easiest quickest read and a really cool idea and the lighting will be amazing. 3 I wonder if I’d understand it as quickly if I didnt read what you wrote first. But once the viewer gets it, it is powerful. They all are! Looking forward to progress, I love your artwork.

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          • K
            Kat SVS OG last edited by

            I like 1 the best because it could be really fun, but 2 would have cool lighting. Can’t go wrong with either one!

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            • JudeKillory
              JudeKillory last edited by

              great thumbnails, I like 2. It's the most legible, I thought 3 was an amazon delivery person then I read your notes and realized I was wrong. 1 is beautifully designed-great house, but I struggle reading the message you're trying to convey. I love the environment in the first thumbnail though.

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                @Gary-Wilkinson glad to see you back on the forums! I like number 1 the best. I also see lots of potential with number 3.


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                • xin li
                  xin li last edited by

                  @Gary-Wilkinson is number 2 a kid sitting in a bird cage? Love it. I made a similar thumbnail a couple weeks ago in the begining of the lockdown. I found it surreal and strange to see that the only thing that was on the street by then was pigons ad crows. I was trying to make the windows on the building look like birdcages, but I could not get the image to work entirely. So it was just lying around in my ipad and do nothing. Your thumbnail shows me a very elegent solution by making one cage a focus. wow. I would love to see that idea come to the final :-).
                  Hope you do not mind I share my thumbnail here:
                  birdcage.jpg

                  Web: www.lixin.no
                  IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                  • Dima Eichhorn
                    Dima Eichhorn @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    @Gary-Wilkinson N1 is my favourite

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                    • ajillustrates
                      ajillustrates last edited by

                      @Gary-Wilkinson My vote is for the first one. I'd love to see the wires criss crossing all over.

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                      • Johanna Kim
                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson Hi Gary, as always, such great ideas. Sorry for the late vote. Love the imagined world in #1. It expresses the theme, but #1 still leaves room for humor.

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