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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by TessaW

      @Heather-Boyd Oh no she didn't! Betrayal! 😲 lol.

      Oof, yeah I guess it does look really high. I'd need to fix that if I went with 3.

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by

        My favorite for composition and connection between the characters is three. Second favorite is 2. Buy I like that before the moment of action and connection in three.πŸ™‚

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        • Kristin Dudish
          Kristin Dudish last edited by

          I LOVE the interaction between the characters in 3! (It does look like it might be a bit of a jump for such young characters though?) But, I think you've nailed the anticipation (and in-it-togetherness) with their body language... the slightly bent knees, the hand holding, the expression... Fantastic!

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

            @TessaW i love 3

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            • Neha Rawat
              Neha Rawat last edited by

              I love 3 and screams "pact". 2 is a fun image in general πŸ™‚

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              • Rachel Horne
                Rachel Horne @TessaW last edited by

                @TessaW I like 3 but 2 works nicely aswell.

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                • xin li
                  xin li last edited by

                  I love #3 - "the moment before" is always has a lot more tension to me. And it hit the prompt clearer.

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                  • TessaW
                    TessaW last edited by

                    Thank you guys so much for your input! Here's a WIP of what I have so far. Is the setting clear? Does the height look appropriate? Do the figures look like they are relating to the perspective appropriately?

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                    • Rachel Horne
                      Rachel Horne @TessaW last edited by

                      @TessaW yes, the height issue appears fine now. It’s looking great and the perspective looks good to me.

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                      • Frost Drive
                        Frost Drive @TessaW last edited by

                        Yeah I agree the perspective looks good now! Appropriate jump for children!!

                        Now all the picture is missing is, in the water you need a shark silhouette 😜

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by

                          Yes! Thank you guys!

                          @Frost-Drive Lol! That would turn it into a bit of different story. 😝 The spot I based this off of had a shark sighting there once! Whoops. Nobody was jumping there for a bit.

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                            A Former User last edited by

                            #3 is very cool.

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