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    WIP magazine cover, critiques requested ;) - final updated July 29

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    • idid
      idid last edited by

      Hi again everyone, I really appreciate all your critiques/suggestions! I have finalized the cover illustration and attached it here (it is a bit tilted and logo/texts on the cover will compensate for that). The editor also prefers a really whiter background so I changed the level of background digitally.

      I learned a lot from this experience, and .... also realized there's so much to improve in my illustration as color palette, way of rendering, etc. .... so more critiques are definitely needed in the future 🤗

      Thank you again!

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      • holleywilliamson
        holleywilliamson SVS OG @idid last edited by

        @idid looks great! All your characters are so cute. Is that traditionally done to start with?

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        • idid
          idid @holleywilliamson last edited by

          @holleywilliamson Thank you! they are traditionally done 🙂 background level has been changed digitally

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            It turned out beautifully!

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            Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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            • Blitz55
              Blitz55 last edited by

              Completely late to this party but this is a fantastic thread. I loved seeing the process toward completion. The final is absolutely charming in it's style and I think reads really well.

              Draw, Draw, Draw, Draw and Draw Some More!
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/levisimpson55/

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              • idid
                idid @Blitz55 last edited by

                @Blitz55 Thank you so much! I think I'll never be able to make that far without suggestions from people on this forum.

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                • idid
                  idid @TessaW last edited by

                  @TessaW Thank you! your suggestions are so helpful!

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @idid last edited by

                    @idid Beautiful! Did you do paint this piece traditionally.

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                    • idid
                      idid @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you! Yes, I paint it traditionally with watercolor and colored pencil. Digitally changed the background level a little bit.

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @idid last edited by

                        @idid i love how organic it looks. The texture and colors are amazing!

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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