WIP magazine cover, critiques requested ;) - final updated July 29

j.sienkowski

@idid I definitely think that the concept of A nails the "protect/care" angle more so than B. I also like the depth and warm foreground / cool background of A...Basically, I'm really feeling A. The only thing I would change (and this is a personal preference) is the color of the cave. I would use less browns and maybe more reds and oranges to make it feel warmer and contrast with the cool snowy background. Great work on this. Please post the final work if you can!

Nyrryl Cadiz

@idid cool! Which magazine was this for?

@idid I think these are wonderful. It seems like a great idea to give two options if you can. Curving the ground on B makes it so much stronger, and the second option on that one has a really nice composition. I think some things that would help on that one would be to soften the other straight lines. Can all the plants be gently curving as well? The only problem I have with B2 aside from that is that the snow is in front of the sled, and it would be coming off the runners toward the back and edges.

idid

@j-sienkowski Thank you for this great suggestion! I'll try to play with background temperature a bit, to see if it gets a bit warmer.

Sure I'll post the finished illustration. Whichever one the publisher selects.

idid

@carolinebautista Ah, so helpful! Let me try if soften the straight line helps, and also add more warm colors ! Maybe I am making the colors too cool unintentionally --- It has been really warm recently ...

stay cool !

idid

@Nyrryl-Cadiz It is for a literature digest magazine by POPLAR Publishing Co. They are mainly in Asia market, mostly Japan / China / Taiwan , etc.

cszoltan

Hi Idid, I think that A is much stronger, the composition is perfect for all the text and "labels" that have to go on a magazine cover. The idea that you can see outside is interesting, but wouldn't it be much better to have a simple cave background as well, just so that the text can read more easily.
Cant wait to see your progress!

chrisaakins

@idid I really like A. I think the colors are very good. I don't think you need to warm them up any. They definitely feel warm in comparison to the outside and the kid's outfits and colors contrast very nicely. I think if you warmed it up they might get lost. The cooler scenes are nice in their colors but it is not reading "yeti" to me. It just looks like a large circular critter. But A definitely reads protection and care. I love it. I really like the character design and the watercolor effect of your medium.

idid

@cszoltan and @chrisaakins Thank you! I like A better, too! I made a few changes after your suggestions and sent it to editors, they eventually chose B2. They liked all of them and B2 has a bright color that kids will love. So I am ready to illustrate on paper now! Can't wait

I'll share a finished piece once it is approved.

Many thanks to all of you!

cszoltan

@idid Cant wait to see the final cover Idid!

idid

Hi again everyone, I really appreciate all your critiques/suggestions! I have finalized the cover illustration and attached it here (it is a bit tilted and logo/texts on the cover will compensate for that). The editor also prefers a really whiter background so I changed the level of background digitally.

I learned a lot from this experience, and .... also realized there's so much to improve in my illustration as color palette, way of rendering, etc. .... so more critiques are definitely needed in the future

Thank you again!

holleywilliamson

@idid looks great! All your characters are so cute. Is that traditionally done to start with?

idid

@holleywilliamson Thank you! they are traditionally done background level has been changed digitally

TessaW

It turned out beautifully!

Blitz55

Completely late to this party but this is a fantastic thread. I loved seeing the process toward completion. The final is absolutely charming in it's style and I think reads really well.

idid

@Blitz55 Thank you so much! I think I'll never be able to make that far without suggestions from people on this forum.

idid

@TessaW Thank you! your suggestions are so helpful!

Nyrryl Cadiz

@idid Beautiful! Did you do paint this piece traditionally.

idid

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you! Yes, I paint it traditionally with watercolor and colored pencil. Digitally changed the background level a little bit.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@idid i love how organic it looks. The texture and colors are amazing!